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A Cold, Relentless Love

soon it will be spring a time when night bends into day and the snow rots to dark water like a memory chasing its shadow into the violent mouth of the cold wide ocean

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Date: 2/26/2024 5:29:00 PM
unusual and creative as you described winter's demise. I liked 'snow rots to dark water like a memory.' That's a powerful image. Well done, Mat. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/26/2024 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Sara, a pleasant and creative evening to you
Date: 2/26/2024 3:23:00 PM
I could always feel the summer dying but I never thought that of winter and I have never seen anyone describing it. I like it a lot!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/26/2024 3:30:00 PM
thank you for your observations - kindest regards, mat

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