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I am a retired Ironworker(35 years Local 7), a lifetime Boston, Mass resident.  I am old enough to know better - but don't.


OH, LET'S JUST CALL IT POETRY

Blog Posted:6/26/2021 6:01:00 AM

Oh let’s just call it poetry

And let it go at that

And end the endless quarrel

This hissy hissy spat

For if it be – it is

And if it ain’t – it “cain’t”

Measure the inspection

When mundane’s considered quaint

 

Can it be a sonnet

Without a Shakespeare bonnet

Can it be “real” verse

When laced with idle curse

Or worse – a lover’s rhyme

Of roses lost in time

 

For it would seem the writer

Could have pulled the strings much tighter

Presented stanza’ed  ugliness

In phrases somewhat lighter

 

But then again it’s filtered through

My mind and all its ucky goo

And there it struggles hopelessly

Demanding that I set it free

From what the words have found in me

 

Oh, let’s just call it poetry

And let it go at that!!!

 

 



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Date: 7/9/2021 11:05:00 AM
Fantastic!! :)
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Date: 6/30/2021 3:08:00 PM
thanks for the smiles John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2021 2:08:00 AM
I like this one, John, brilliant:) I prefer rhyming forms, but then, any kind of poetry delights me:)
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Date: 6/27/2021 7:34:00 AM
John, creative and fun write, so many forms to untangle, and rules to unchain, but I sort of like the challenge, a bit like putting puzzles together, although writing a poem just called poetry fills me with joy, peace _Constance
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Date: 6/27/2021 7:26:00 AM
Live and let live ~ the good, the bad and the ugly ~ loved your poem, John.
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Date: 6/26/2021 9:26:00 PM
Not only in poetry our whole life is full of meaningless rules which we follow. I find these rules stifling free flow of thoughts. Some poetic form seem so silly. I prefer imagism. Good blog want to read what others say. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Date: 6/26/2021 2:05:00 PM
Rules is Rules and 'em Rules Rules The Roost Don't choose a Spade When a Shovel will do Or Dig with your hands, Free Verse
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Date: 6/26/2021 1:59:00 PM
I like this kind of poetry!!
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Date: 6/26/2021 11:34:00 AM
Let 'er rip!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/26/2021 1:24:00 PM
alas, caught in the act of writing for my own contest.....
Date: 6/26/2021 8:54:00 AM
There is a lot of merit to what you are saying, John. I liked your poem. "Let's just call it poetry!"
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My Past Blog Posts

 
FINALLY FINALIZED....There is a darkness
Date Posted: 4/22/2024 2:07:00 PM
HI-POO SENRYU CONTEST FLUSHED...
Date Posted: 10/30/2023 4:50:00 AM
Hi-Poo contest
Date Posted: 10/28/2023 6:33:00 AM
What was I thinking contest finalized
Date Posted: 9/27/2023 5:15:00 AM
ALERT!!! HE JUST COMMENTED ON HIS OWN POEM!!!!
Date Posted: 9/19/2023 6:49:00 AM
Don't Fight it - Write it contest results
Date Posted: 6/25/2023 11:58:00 AM
HITHER AND ANON
Date Posted: 6/14/2023 5:33:00 AM
COMPLIANT POEMOLOGY
Date Posted: 4/12/2023 6:37:00 AM
To Comment or Respond to Same
Date Posted: 1/23/2023 7:52:00 PM
JUDGEMENT FREE ZONES
Date Posted: 1/14/2023 6:04:00 AM
inserted ads in poetry comments
Date Posted: 11/28/2022 8:42:00 AM
OH TO BLOG
Date Posted: 11/17/2022 5:22:00 PM
HOW TO JUDGE A POETRY CONTEST
Date Posted: 10/10/2022 6:57:00 AM
PAPER AIRPLANES CONTEST
Date Posted: 9/14/2022 5:51:00 AM
SOMETHING OLD SOMETHING NEW.......FORGOTTEN CONTEST
Date Posted: 6/8/2022 5:22:00 AM
DEAR INHABITANTS
Date Posted: 4/21/2022 5:06:00 PM
ALAS, ALACK AND BALDERDASH
Date Posted: 3/18/2022 6:40:00 AM
DAY BREAK
Date Posted: 2/16/2022 4:57:00 AM
REMEMBER WHEN....
Date Posted: 11/19/2021 4:49:00 AM
STEM CLASS - circa 1955
Date Posted: 11/11/2021 5:00:00 AM
FRIGHTDAY (aka Friday)
Date Posted: 11/5/2021 8:04:00 AM
THRIST DAY (aka Thursday)
Date Posted: 11/4/2021 6:28:00 AM
WHEN'S DAY(aka Wednesday)
Date Posted: 11/3/2021 6:27:00 AM
thoughts on a murky morning
Date Posted: 10/28/2021 6:54:00 AM
TOO'S DAY
Date Posted: 10/26/2021 6:26:00 AM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
5/10/2024 OPENING DAY Free verselust,spring,
5/10/2024 OPENING DAY - edit for contest Free verselust,rose,spring,
5/7/2024 I did half a cart wheel Free versehumor,life,nostalgia,
5/5/2024 heretically heretical Monokuhumor,word play,
5/5/2024 on the edge of sleep Free versedream,imagination,sleep,
5/5/2024 Beggars Choice Monokulife,
5/4/2024 age is over-rated Free verseage,grandfather,humor,lif
5/1/2024 C'MON PAPA Free verseage,fun,grandson,
4/30/2024 burning rubber Monokuhumor,
4/28/2024 take my words Free versepoetry,self,words,
4/26/2024 the mirror doesn't lie Free verseallusion,self,
4/24/2024 If all there is---is Rhymefun,time,word play,
4/24/2024 EPHEMERA Free verselife,memory,
4/23/2024 BEAUTY Monokugarden,
4/22/2024 Civil Lies Questionkuconfusion,
4/21/2024 ZEPHYR Verseallusion,life,
4/20/2024 Monoku-ku Monokuspring,
4/20/2024 That Was Then, This is Now Free versehumor,irony,
4/18/2024 half and half Senryuspring,
4/17/2024 To Which Image Shall We Cling Free verseart,life,spiritual,
4/15/2024 YELLOW Free verseyellow,
4/15/2024 TAXING THOUGHTS Coupletwords,
4/14/2024 lost and found Free verseconfusion,god,
4/13/2024 I Speak of Peace Free verseamerica,confusion,
4/12/2024 take two aspirin and Monokuhumor,
4/12/2024 I Saw God But Now What Free versegod,
4/11/2024 Hot Line Call Monokuhumor,lust,
4/11/2024 I WRITE Free versepoets,writing,
4/6/2024 Lost Sock Trail Rhymehumor,
4/5/2024 splash Monokurain,
4/4/2024 For love cannot walk away Free verseage,character,love,passio
4/1/2024 OH APRIL Free versesexy,spring,
4/1/2024 Touche' Monokudark,
3/30/2024 If I Listened Versebeauty,sound,
3/29/2024 If you asked I would tell you of my secrets Free versesilence,
3/29/2024 Love's Limits Monokulove,word play,
3/27/2024 is love not like the weathered bark Verselove,
3/27/2024 Just hit enter Monokuhumor,
3/27/2024 Wis-dumb Monokumarriage,
3/27/2024 smooth as silk Limerickcat,technology,
3/27/2024 The Last Bus Limerickhumor,
3/24/2024 Ethereal Lanterns Versebeauty,dream,
3/24/2024 7:15 on a Sunday evening Free verseconfusion,
3/22/2024 long tail - short poem Rhymefun,muse,poetry,
3/22/2024 BITE ME Free versehumor,poetry,
3/20/2024 wind dreams Free versedream,wind,
3/20/2024 for worse Free versetime,
3/18/2024 become as we Free versepoets,
3/17/2024 COLD SUN Free verseage,
3/16/2024 I saw God Coupletgod,life,
3/13/2024 Winter Listseasons,
3/1/2024 JAN-itorial overreach Rhymefun,humor,nature,
3/1/2024 Oh, March Free versemarch,
2/29/2024 For Love is but a Word Sonnetlove,lust,passion,
2/28/2024 the hem of sunset Free verselonely,
2/27/2024 beware the gods Verseconfusion,god,men,
2/27/2024 TRUTH BE TOLD Monokusilence,
2/27/2024 GAME TIME Rhymehumor,
2/26/2024 a hazy full moon sighs Free versemoon,poetry,poets,
2/25/2024 the sun was late this morning Free versemorning,
2/24/2024 What To Do Monokuwisdom,
2/24/2024 Lost Amid Now Free verseage,life,time,
2/21/2024 this trail of words Free versepoetry,poets,writing,
2/20/2024 A Raindrop Free versesilence,
2/20/2024 table for three Senryufate,
2/20/2024 a Streak of Red Free versebird,nature,
2/18/2024 It started with a blank canvas Free verseart,imagination,
2/18/2024 POTTY TRAINING Rhymehumor,
2/17/2024 paper trail Monokudog,humor,writing,
2/16/2024 MUD Ethereespring,
2/16/2024 P-oopS Questionkuanimal,
2/15/2024 so I did Monokugrowing up,life,
2/14/2024 Soft Shadow Slippers Free versesunset,
2/13/2024 A Fistful of Senryu Senryulife,
2/12/2024 JAN'S FANS Limerickfun,
2/10/2024 I heard my tongue scream Free versesensual,
2/9/2024 Arguing With Inanimate Objects Free versehumor,technology,
2/9/2024 Under the glow of a dead moon Free versemoon,
2/9/2024 The Period Monokuhistory,time,
2/8/2024 Love's Muse Monokulove,
2/7/2024 Before the day turns into night - NFC Free versesunset,
2/6/2024 In Grimaced Glee Free versedark,
2/6/2024 AP-less Rhymefun,word play,writing,
2/5/2024 Nothing Seems To Matter Free verseloneliness,sorrow,
2/5/2024 FOUR PLAY Versepoetry,
2/2/2024 Anger Hides Free verseage,love,pain,
2/1/2024 Half a Buzz Monokulost,
1/31/2024 I am February Free versefebruary,
1/31/2024 MUSELESS IN SEATTLE Rhymehumor,muse,poetry,writing
1/30/2024 Chances are Monokuirony,
1/30/2024 Quiet on the set Questionkuhumor,
1/29/2024 I have seen the peaks Free verselife,wisdom,
1/29/2024 ICE CHIPS Haikuwind,
1/28/2024 Hunters moon Haikuautumn,
1/27/2024 PAPER KINGDOM Free versedog,humor,
1/26/2024 twice Monokuword play,
1/25/2024 For fluffy tails may tempt a wily minx Rhymefun,winter,
1/25/2024 HOORAY for the N-A Rhymejudgement,poetry,poets,
1/24/2024 what do you do when duct tape won't fix it Free verseage,confusion,fear,life,
1/24/2024 till death Senryuage,love,

My Photos


Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
She's Always Drawing Mermaids Sonnetsad,
A Friendly Goodbye Free versebeauty,
Paradise Now Free versereligion,
Painting With Words Coupletpoetry,writing,
Dark Cinquaindark,death,
Roadmap Rhymeage,
The Wintered Soul Among Wisteria Sonnetgrief,
And Still She Smiles Free versedepression,friendship,lov
'theatre of the Absurd'-Catoptric Corridors of Time Rhymehumanity,metaphor,solitud
Death Becomes Art Rhymedeath,depression,poetry,
Sacred Dwellers Coupletanimal,native american,sp
Moonless Curse Senryuappreciation,hope,longing
Rise Up and Sing the Sun Sonnetday,
Scurry Now a Panther Comes Your Way Free versepoetry,
In Praise of Anonymity Free versepoetry,
Courage Free versecourage,love,
Totems of the Mind Free versehistory,muse,mystery,
Resolutions Rhymenew year,
Understanding Free versetruth,
God Was Wearing a Dress Free versespiritual,
The Souls of Leaves Rondeaunature,
All That I Have Taken In Free verseeve,nature,spiritual,suns
The Poets Are Dead Free versewriting,
Lightning They Name Is Woman Personificationsky,
Your Name Free verseanxiety,childhood,fear,
The Park Fountain Free verselight,moon,night,spiritua
Meditations On a Derelict Wharf Free verseage,hope,mystery,visionar
Seattle Streets Free verseage,old,
A Life Not Lived Ethereeangst,anxiety,betrayal,co
Tomorrow Free versesunset,time,
In All Its Splendor Haibunautumn,nature,seasons,
Wasted Things Free versepoetry,
On Rainy Afternoons Free versechild,sad,solitude,
Narrow Margin Dramatic Verseanalogy,how i feel,life,
How Much More God Versechildhood,memory,
A Little Caveman Reasoning Free versepoetry,
Nameless Rhymesad,
Dew Kissed Dawn Free verseappreciation,light,mornin
Snowflakes Free verseanalogy,life,perspective,
Death To The Poets Rhymepoets,war,
Betrayal of Innocence-A Tattered Flag Free versebetrayal,innocence,
What is Black Beauty? I do not know?beauty,black african amer
The Brutal Truth collaboration with Sandra Weiss Rhymeage,angst,
Ashes Free versefire,nature,tree,

Fav Poets

PoetCountry 
Jan Allison Isle Of Man Flag Isle Of Man Read
Andrea Dietrich United States Flag United States Read
Maurice Yvonne Canada Flag Canada Read
Constance La France Canada Flag Canada Read
Nette Onclaud Philippines Flag Philippines Read
Connie Marcum Wong United States Flag United States Read
Dialectic Crisis United States Flag United States Read
Gershon Wolf United States Flag United States Read
Dale Gregory Cozart United States Flag United States Read
Panagiota Romios United States Flag United States Read
Regina Mcintosh United States Flag United States Read
Maureen Mcgreavy Canada Flag Canada Read

Book: Shattered Sighs