a wind whispers

the silence of peace an idle sword cuts the wind honing its edge John G. Lawless ©3/20/2025

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/21/2025 5:49:00 AM

Hello John, What a beautiful reflection on peace and readiness. The image of the wind whispering silence is serene, while the idle sword cutting the wind creates a striking contrast. It's as if the sword is prepared for action yet remains still, symbolizing a balance between peace and vigilance. Thank you for this thought-provoking piece. Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/20/2025 9:27:00 PM

As graphically good as a senryu gets, John. Bravo! ~ gw

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/20/2025 12:16:00 PM

I enjoyed reading "a wind whispers" write. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........

Karen Jones

Date: 3/20/2025 12:14:00 PM

Love the imagery!