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Levity escapes me as the sun fades

Levity escapes me as the sun fades Long shadows reach out to join in darkness Silence gives way to a humming moonrise Stealthy scents tempt predatory patience Red eyes gaze into hungers haunting need Soft feet muffle the presence of the prey The subtlety of motionless movement Awaiting the starters pistol of fear Moonlight bathes the edges in silvery blue A painter’s trick to lure you to its trap Hold you in its masquerade of now The brushstrokes of darkness counting coup

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Date: 3/26/2025 7:49:00 AM
being of the nocturnal type I enjoyed this
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Date: 3/20/2025 9:28:00 PM
John, I love your 'serious poems' every bit as much as your hilarious ones. Maybe more. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Date: 3/19/2025 10:55:00 AM
Dear John, I felt the opening in this poem and i love the way youv written this in such a descriptive manner! The depth abd flow of each line is so very soul stirring and so picturesque too! Especially love "Silence gives way to a humming moonrise Stealthy scents tempt predatory patience" beautiful and deeply moving! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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John Lawless
Date: 3/20/2025 11:28:00 AM
appreciate the visit Ink and your kind words of praise

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