Jack Ellison Poet Rhyme

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Super size your life
Live extra large
At love's drive-up window
Kisses no charge

Giggles on the side
With life's hot sauce
Squeezies to go
Hugsies no cost

Big joyful shakes
How much do I owe
Two spoons of love
And smiles to go

Fried morsels of bliss
Is this month's toy
You're next in line
For double size joy

Fast food for the soul
Is a happy refrain
So O.D. on the good times
And come back again!

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Daniel Henry Rodgers April 29, 2025 at 12:04 PM Hello Jack, What pure delight-a playful, heart-sized menu of joy and affection. I love how you turn life’s simple pleasures into a fast-food feast for the soul to savor every giggle, hug, and spoonful of love. You make happiness feel easy, abundant, and always worth coming back for. Thanks for serving up extra helpings of warmth and smiles-no charge, just connection. Congrats on POTD! Spring, Blessings, My Friend, Daniel Jack Ellison April 30, 2025 at 5:46 AM This is a blessed response to my fast-food entry! Life has become a series of short visits to the corner McDonald's Thanks for the POTD vote Daniel! Cheers my friend!

Gershon Wolf April 27, 2025 at 3:41 PM This is beyond marvelous, Jack! Congrats on a spectacular POTD! ~ Gershon Jack Ellison April 28, 2025 at 5:20 AM These are great words you send me Gershon! Happy day my good friend!

Daisy Meadows April 27, 2025 at 12:00 AM A fun poem!! Congratulations on your POTD.Well done. Jack Ellison April 27, 2025 at 7:13 AM Love your name! Thanks for the POTD!

Arlo Parker April 26, 2025 at 6:13 PM POTD hell yes!!!! Out-freaken-standing, Jack. Jack Ellison April 27, 2025 at 7:10 AM POTD!!! big surprise! Thanks Arlo!

Brandy Nicole April 26, 2025 at 4:28 PM ' Two spoons of love and smiles to go. ' Perfect combination, indeed. Your thoughts bring a ' smile ' to my heart. :) This is so creative and uplifting. Congratulations Jack, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Jack Ellison April 27, 2025 at 7:06 AM Keep those smiles smiling dear Brandy... and thanks for the POTD wishes!

Terry Flood April 26, 2025 at 3:26 PM Blimey, Jack… McDonalds has changed since my last visit. Congrats on a fun POTD. Terry Jack Ellison April 27, 2025 at 7:16 AM Holy frog leap Batman!!!!!!! Jack Ellison April 27, 2025 at 6:57 AM Holy "blimey/crikey" matters not Terry!!!!!!!!! Terry Flood April 26, 2025 at 5:17 PM They mean, pretty much, the same thing, Tom. My gran used to hate ’blimey’ as she thought it meant ‘blind me’. Aside from that they’re both an expression of surprise or astonishment!

Mickey Grubb April 26, 2025 at 3:08 PM Playful imagery, Jack, uplifting my spirit...congrats on your uplifting POTD. Jack Ellison April 27, 2025 at 6:51 AM Fun stuff eh Mickey Thanks for the POTD Honour! Cheers Jack!!!

Michael Tor April 26, 2025 at 1:10 PM Jack WOWSY!!! Congratulations Dear Friend. love this beautiful message in your words. I keep telling Tom Cunningham I will be over to catch up on your Poetry and I haven't because of my crazy schedule, but I will. I was so happy to see you receiving this great Honor. Way to go Jack... This one is a favorite for me... Jack Ellison April 27, 2025 at 6:47 AM Great to hear from you again Michael!!! Halleluia! It gives us a chance to connect up again! Much happiness....................Michael!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2025 at 11:58 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:08 PM THANK YOU a great big bunch dear Ann-Lise love Jacko XXX

Jim Slaughter April 26, 2025 at 10:40 AM Great fun, Jack! Congrats on POTD. Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:17 PM Had fun with this one Jim and the POTD

Zyrool Gifford April 26, 2025 at 10:40 AM Hello Jack, congratulations on your POTD win with this wonderful piece. Beautifully written. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, fellow poet. Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:11 PM Thanks my friend for the POTD!

Benjamin Bartley April 26, 2025 at 10:06 AM Big joyful shakes How much do I owe Two spoons of love And smiles to go Is my favorite stanza! Congrats on this cheerful POTD! Thanks for sharing! Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:19 PM It's FREE!!! Believe or not! Thanks Benjamin

Paula Goldsmith April 26, 2025 at 8:57 AM Congratulations on your fun POTD win. A Great Write... Fav for me... Have a wonderful day with your win. Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 9:10 AM Thanks a bunch my dear Maureen!!! It's been way too long sweetie! Love is number one in my heart!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 26, 2025 at 6:53 AM Lovely to read you in the POTD spotlight today dear Jack! Congratulations, and have a wonderful day! xomo Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 9:17 AM Thanks for the POTD dear Maureen! Love from me to you sweetie xxx

Tania Kitchin April 26, 2025 at 5:11 AM Jack, nicely penned and good advice. Congratulations on POTD. Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:22 PM Thank you muchly for the POTD!

Maria Williams April 26, 2025 at 2:09 AM Congratulations on this gem of yours getting POTD Jack. Great to see you still here...Hugs Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:27 PM They don't happen often but when they do... :)

Beryl Edmonds April 26, 2025 at 1:10 AM Super poetry Jack, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:40 PM Beryl my dear friend I thank you a big bunch and for the POTD!!!

Karen Jones April 26, 2025 at 12:33 AM A cute and delightful poem! Thanks for sharing and congratulations on potd! Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:29 PM Thanks for the POTD dear Karen!

Tom Cunningham April 26, 2025 at 12:31 AM Back with big congratulations to you Jack on today's POTD honour. Have a great weekend. Tom Jack Ellison April 26, 2025 at 1:25 PM

John Lawless April 25, 2025 at 4:52 AM Those oh so may special moments we took for granted...let he who sees the day seize the day....nice on Jack.. I shall FAVE it as a reminder keep making memories. Jack Ellison April 25, 2025 at 5:35 AM Good words you send me my good buddy... thanks a bunch! Have a good one John!!!

Darlene De Beaulieu April 24, 2025 at 4:36 PM Hello Happy Jack, this will be my fav. Love, Darlene xxxx i like the lines OD on he good times. Love, Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu April 25, 2025 at 10:58 AM Hello Happy Jack, you are very welcome. enjoy your day. Love, Darlenexxx Jack Ellison April 25, 2025 at 5:20 AM Whoaaa a fav! Thank you Darlene... have an extra fine day dear Darlen xxx

Tom Cunningham April 24, 2025 at 8:12 AM Great advice Jack. The bigger the better. Tom Jack Ellison April 24, 2025 at 9:33 AM Great to hear from you my very good friend! Have a great week ahead Tom!

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2025 at 7:01 AM - The best "gifts" in life are free ... small or big ... fast food I can do without ... (nowhere to buy it where I live :) - Have a happy super big day, Jack :) - hugs (free) Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2025 at 11:59 AM :))) Jack Ellison April 24, 2025 at 7:27 AM I'm really much too young to get old Something's drastically out of whack I'm still this handsome, charismatic stud Why's my body giving me flack?