Look What I Thaw

Slowly releasing its grip
The ice recedes
Mud warms in a faint sun
Jonquils peek through snow
Robins open the summer house
Winter chuckles
Spring awaits her curtain call
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Tor Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 8:58 PM
Looking forward to theeing...
Wolf Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 7:37 PM
I tought I thaw it too!
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 4:31 PM
fabulous title John - i can't wait for Spring's curtain call - get rid of the blankets of snow or winter duvets lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Greenhough Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Robins seem to be the first to migrate. I like the picture of transfers, one season to the next.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 1:17 PM
I enjoyed reading your write. Spring will be here soon. Have a blessed day............
Bauer Avatar
February 26, 2025 at 12:55 PM
love the title, john and the last two lines are wonderful! (the rest is very good, too)...
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