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On Rainy Afternoons

From nowhere, a type of sadness descends as that which sometimes possesses a child on rainy afternoons when what is vulnerable withdraws and curls up in a corner of the mind to seal itself with silence. It's a sadness that doesn’t wear a name, more like a shadow cast by something way back that memory has forgot or put away concealed behind a veil of sleep. It comes creeping out of the quiet and hangs as a blur beyond the reach of sight, a blank in the headlights of a child’s far away stare, without shape or form, a sadness perhaps left by a scar or the imprint of a longing cast by a previous life, or nothing, nothing more than an ordinary sadness that comes upon us all on rainy afternoons, when we are alone.

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Date: 10/17/2023 6:43:00 AM
Paul, have you been peeking into my rainy afternoons???? This is beautifully done and puts me in memory of the "the unexamined life" thingy. I have a few demons that lay in wait for a "quiet" rainy afternoon. I shall fave this pointed insight
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Date: 10/17/2023 5:06:00 AM
This is brilliant Paul, I completely identify with this and have no clue how typical it is. I feel it creep and sometimes push it back or I might just be grabbed by it. It can feel inexplicable and the emotion attached to the fact it feels unentitled can be consuming also. Never have I been able to express this poetically. I appreciate what you put into words and will add this as a fav to revisit
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