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How Pagans Came To Be

In the summer When the sky is clear The stars are more my home Than my own bed The stones and flora Whisper my name In the breeze The water is warm Silver springs call me In the summer My skin thaws And my bones ache For something less Than ordinary In the summer I understand How pagans Came to be

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Date: 6/15/2024 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. In the summer the sky can be filled with extra stars. Have a great weekend with your win..................
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Date: 6/14/2024 7:10:00 PM
The stars and the wind, how summer feels upon the skin, looking for something less than ordinary. All of these, plus many more, describe those that worship creation; instead of the Creator. This is so beautifully written and expressed. Congratulations Some One, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/14/2024 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on the POTD! This was a very vivid penning, great job! It's infused with pretty much a lot of things. Have a Great Evening! Warm Regards, William
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Date: 6/14/2024 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on this well penned POTD!. The imagery is outstanding and your oneness with and love for our planet shines through. Blessings to you!
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Date: 6/14/2024 2:08:00 PM
I’m agnostic myself S/O so probably a pagan, delighted you understand how I came to be, congratulations on a very meaningful POTD, cheers David
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Date: 6/14/2024 10:16:00 AM
Well, that certainly might explain how "naturists" came to be. A great piece, at any rate, S O, and congrats on POTD.
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Date: 6/14/2024 8:13:00 AM
Whoa! Your understanding is far beyond mine! Congrats on POTD! ~ N. E. One
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Date: 6/14/2024 6:08:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/14/2024 4:36:00 AM
Worshippers of the creation rather than the Creator? Paul speaks of them in Romans 1:18-23. Enjoy your day in the light
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Date: 6/14/2024 4:30:00 AM
Beautiful! Enjoyed every line, "The stars are more my home" this line sounded enchanting to me! Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD. Best wishes ~
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Date: 6/14/2024 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations to on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 6/14/2024 2:08:00 AM
Enjoyed the read, congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 6/14/2024 1:31:00 AM
Many congratulations for POTD. So well written and really enjoyed it. I especially love the line, ‘ the stars are more my home’. Enchanting read. Enjoy your celebratory day x
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Date: 6/14/2024 1:28:00 AM
A compelling write, superbly penned, warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 6/14/2024 1:11:00 AM
You are quite magical, love it and congratulations on POTD
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Date: 6/14/2024 12:47:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I enjoy this poem.
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Date: 6/13/2024 7:46:00 AM
FANTASTIC...A FAVE.....simplicity in a sacrilegious world
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