Dew Kissed Dawn

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Regina Mcintosh.

Written on November 30, 2023

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Dew glistens on a frail rose petal, As grief fades from the dawn, Exposing the moment when light stirs Whispering hope on silence gone. Dew glistens and remembers to breathe… Inhaling grace and exhaling faith to carry on!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Silent One

Date: 12/17/2023 5:26:00 AM

This was too good for a HM!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/3/2023 7:31:00 AM

YA beautiful poem and your last line is brilliant dear Gina. :)

Valsa George

Date: 12/1/2023 4:49:00 AM

Beautifully written dear Gina. A dew drenched flower is such a beautiful sight to behold. I love - "inhale grace and exhale faith". The image of the pastel colored rose frilled with glistening dew drops too is so beautiful.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/30/2023 3:34:00 PM

amazing lines, Gina. The dewy rose picture was perfect..and seeing one will now remind me of you and your words about inhaling grace and exhaling faith to carry on....that last line was just powerful! Thank you for sharing it. hugs, Sara

Silent One

Date: 11/30/2023 10:04:00 AM

Love that photo and youbhave written a beautiful poem to accompany it..

John Lawless

Date: 11/30/2023 9:21:00 AM

WOW....I can hear old Rudyard saying "Damn, IF only I could'a wrote that". "as grief fades from the Dawn"...."damn, If only I could'a wrote that"....Anyway Regina this gets a legitimate authentic Boston WICKED AWESOME.....and a FAVE