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Tomorrow

Late afternoon. I settle into the last warmth cradled in a patch of mottled sunlight. The garden is beginning to darken and fold away. Is this all there is ?. Reflections in the cooling air, cloudy streaks on a lens trying to focus meaning, a pale flickering of things going out. No crescendos of birdsong or the wind booming in the air above, nothing but a shallow breath leaving not even the slightest ripple on the still of a late afternoon - something seeping into a nowhere with just enough left over to spill into tomorrow.

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Date: 9/19/2023 1:47:00 AM
Hello, Paul very nice imager your poem paints, I like "a pale flickering of things going out" "the garden is beginning to darken" like as shadow grows slowly over it, well crafted poetry here! Stay Safe too! Perry C.
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/19/2023 5:19:00 AM
Thanks Perry, very much value your positive comments. Good to receive such fedback Regards
Date: 9/18/2023 8:27:00 AM
Yes, in truth in youth we look greater towards tomorrow. But in old age we look greater at the past. When it just may be best to look deeper at the now. This is a superbly crafted poem my friend. A gem to me. A fav you. God bless you.
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Date: 9/19/2023 5:17:00 AM
Appreciate your thoughtful comments Robert...wise words. Indeed pleased the poem resonated. Regards
Date: 9/15/2023 11:22:00 AM
I enjoyed this one Paul, for me it's staring at all that's perfect but wishing for some sign that I've arrived, my own difficulty is finding contentment - something I'll work on. A pleasure as always to read your work
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/16/2023 9:12:00 PM
Many thanks DD for reading and making comment. Always valued...
Date: 9/15/2023 8:45:00 AM
There is always a touch of farewell on the hint of a coming sunset. Beautifully done Paul, I shall reflect on this on my evening stroll. A definite fave
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Date: 9/16/2023 9:14:00 PM
Appreciate the positive feedback John...do hope the poem added a little to your stroll. Regards.

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