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talked to a star one night

Talked to a star one night
It whispered
From behind a greying cloud
“I’m lonely”
It seems stars are so busy shining
They have little time to chat
They find it ironic that we humans
Write so much about them
Attribute to them strange powers
Of auric ascendancy.

I whispered back
Lest I be thought mad
By other star gazers
“I am lonely also”
It seems that we humans are so busy
Gazing at the stars
We lose track of one another
Stand alone wondering
Why the moonlight is so cold
And the stars seem so sad.

We decided to shine together
And whisper
                    “Come join us any starry night”

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Date: 4/9/2025 6:01:00 PM
Loneliness loves company, like misery...
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Date: 4/3/2025 3:41:00 PM
Was her name Bertha? Careful, there's a reason she's lonely. Seriously though, this is quite awesome. Hugging my girl momentarily
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Date: 4/3/2025 1:43:00 PM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away...............
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Date: 4/3/2025 1:22:00 PM
this is a magical poem, john! love it!
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