The Park Fountain

I have walked about as far
as I can go before a weariness 
threatens to withdraw the pleasure 
of the evening light and the easy 
mood of the park.  The fountain
that had spurted and splashed 
all day has withdrawn back
into its nightlong still
and caught a rising moon 
in its mirrored skirt.

I sit and close my eyes
and feel the world withdrawing 
into somewhere else
as I let go each sound
into a growing quiet. 
It's becoming harder to hold
myself here rather than
to float off where 
the sounds go and all things
not anchored to a self
find a place in the night.

It would be good to go there
and see each atom 
of who I am settle 
a stillness stretched across
time and space and there,
become part of what
mirrors light
even if it's for no more
than the length
of an earthly night.

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Date: 8/27/2023 7:13:00 AM
WOW...A FAVE..magnificent in its depth and spirituality, an open invitation to meditate on that moment when all becomes one. Beautifully written Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/28/2023 4:10:00 AM
Again, too kind with your comments John. Thankyou so much for casting that valued eye of yours over this offering. Regards
Date: 8/27/2023 2:05:00 AM
What a glorious, poetic poem Paul. I love it! So many wonderful lines of verse. I love, ‘and all things not anchored to a self find a place in the night’.I so enjoyed it- felt myself floating away as I read it. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
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Date: 8/28/2023 4:07:00 AM
Appreciate your comments Christina. So pleased you found the poem had meaning for you....receiving such feedback is valued. Thankyou, Paul
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