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The Park Fountain

I have walked about as far as I can go before a weariness threatens to withdraw the pleasure of the evening light and the easy mood of the park. The fountain that had spurted and splashed all day has withdrawn back into its nightlong still and caught a rising moon in its mirrored skirt. I sit and close my eyes and feel the world withdrawing into somewhere else as I let go each sound into a growing quiet. It's becoming harder to hold myself here rather than to float off where the sounds go and all things not anchored to a self find a place in the night. It would be good to go there and see each atom of who I am settle a stillness stretched across time and space and there, become part of what mirrors light even if it's for no more than the length of an earthly night.

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Date: 8/29/2023 12:14:00 AM
It describes for me what it is to go to sleep feeling safe - all consciousness drifts away lightly as opposed to the sleep that is more common that comes from exhaustion and is a lead weight with waking holding the imprint. I went to sleep meditating in the middle of the day recently with a fancy self heating lavender eye mask on and I floated away and joined the atoms I'm sure. Great work, as always
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/29/2023 4:40:00 AM
I must try that self heating eye mask ....sounds interesting. Pleased that you found something worthwhile in the poem DD. As always, truly value your support and kindness. Take care, Paul
Date: 8/27/2023 7:13:00 AM
WOW...A FAVE..magnificent in its depth and spirituality, an open invitation to meditate on that moment when all becomes one. Beautifully written Paul.
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/28/2023 4:10:00 AM
Again, too kind with your comments John. Thankyou so much for casting that valued eye of yours over this offering. Regards
Date: 8/27/2023 2:05:00 AM
What a glorious, poetic poem Paul. I love it! So many wonderful lines of verse. I love, ‘and all things not anchored to a self find a place in the night’.I so enjoyed it- felt myself floating away as I read it. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes.
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/28/2023 4:07:00 AM
Appreciate your comments Christina. So pleased you found the poem had meaning for you....receiving such feedback is valued. Thankyou, Paul

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