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i sat to write of subtle things

I sat to write of subtle things The sun, the gentle warm it brings To melt the ice on dormant springs Awakening the bug that stings Then came thoughts a bit more harsh Large snapping turtles in the marsh Bug-eyed pike with teeth so sharp Chasing dragonflies at dark A soothing hum that fills the air Just letting us know that they’re there Residing between leaf and lair A season’s worth of life to share Thus, do the woods kindly enfold The dreams of lovers young and old Stories hidden, stories told Of moonlit kisses ne’er grown cold

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Date: 3/12/2025 10:57:00 PM
So very poetically beautiful, John. A wonderous poem, truly ... CayCay
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Date: 3/12/2025 7:13:00 PM
This is magical, John. Total enchantment, I say. FAVE-time! Thanks. ~ Gershon
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Date: 3/12/2025 1:21:00 PM
demonstration of your poetic brilliance - excellent poem, love the rhythm
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Date: 3/12/2025 12:52:00 PM
Dreams and kisses of lovers, young or old should ne're grow old. There's the romantic side of John Lawless... alive and well.
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Date: 3/12/2025 12:23:00 PM
I love the turn from the gentle to the wild then a soothing hum and lovers, young and old, enjoy the forest. Delightful!
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Date: 3/12/2025 11:59:00 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous, I think you must have been channeling Robert Frost. A fave for me. (your poem, Frost too obviously) xomo!
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