Memento to the Moon

I left a mirror outside so she could admire her magnificence

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/9/2025 5:55:00 PM

John, This is as witty as they come... And then some! :) Gershon

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/9/2025 2:34:00 PM

this is very cool, john! i like it a lot...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/9/2025 1:19:00 PM

You told a wonderful story in just one line. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful spring day.........

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/9/2025 9:18:00 AM

Luna will illuminate and think of you~

Lin Lane

Date: 4/9/2025 8:46:00 AM

She deserves to see the glow of her beauty and admire it as millions of us have.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/9/2025 8:28:00 AM

So pretty John, I love this!

Ink Empress

Date: 4/9/2025 7:45:00 AM

Wow this is so beautiful dear john! How thoughtful of you to selflessly leave a mirror for her to appreciate her own glow! The moon deserves to see her own beauty! Maybe the mirror would help! Love this one! Clever one!