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Sacred Dwellers

Sacred Dwellers

I am of Native American born
To be caretaker of Mother Earth sworn 

I heal with powers, a medicine man                                    
Tribal’s wise supernatural shaman

I am a sacred carved out Totem Pole
To recount familiar legends, a toll

Insightful spirit animals pride in          
Taking a part as a loved guardian  

I’m the buffalo hunted to survive
Tipis, meat, fur, vital to stay alive

I’m the turtle known as the peacemaker
That’s firm, serene never a forsaker

I am lizard, killing me brings bad luck
The creation story I play, soul struck

I butterfly bringer of dreams, arrange
Transformation and life cycle of change

I the wolf early ancestor of thee
Totem animal, wise, social, and free 

Icon salmon renews energy rays
The legend conveys, respect natures ways




* Shaman translation- The word originates from the language of the Tungus people of Siberia. It can directly be translated literally to “one who works with fire”.
*  Tipis (teepees)
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Blown Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 8:13 AM
finely wrtten poem......yes, the sacred dwelling of spirit(s) behind the being-of-tme may manifest in what they see and then look back...stan
Anaya Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Hi Stan, thank you! I respect the Native American spiritual ways.
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
Anaya Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 4:55 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Peck Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 10:33 AM
We could learn so much from our Native American brothers and sisters--if we would only listen...Your poem is beautiful, Anaya. Congratulations!
Anaya Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Thank you, Ann. Recently they showed our Governor, in Calif., about prevention of wildfires! They have a system... (controlled burn) burn off the debris before it accumulates. It worked! We haven't had wildfires summer of 2022!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 9:32 AM
A rare theme and an exceptional entry, Anaya, compliments truly on your placement my friend, Aloha William
Anaya Avatar
September 30, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Thank you, William, I am honored to write the histories of our land before the Europeans arrived. I appreciate the placement and thank you for supporting P.S. with your unique and creative contests! Aloha ~Anaya
Sangster - K Avatar
September 24, 2022 at 7:44 PM
Wow I absolutely love this! A big fave for me. And and I love American native art :-)
Sangster - K Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 1:35 PM
Thanks Anaya I'll definitely check out the link. Back at ya with the hugs :-)
Anaya Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 12:33 PM
Anne, I'm glad you enjoyed, thank you for the fave. You can find out more about the art on the site! Hugs~ Anaya
Lowe Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 5:33 PM
Beautiful! Pounding rhythmic imaging flow with a deep allegorical message. Thanks for the share, I Am Anaya. ONE. Peace and Love.
Anaya Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 11:02 AM
I appreciate your visit and kind words, my friend Millard Lowe! Thank you, Hugs and peace to you ~Anaya
Nicole Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 7:05 PM
Your words touch my heart is so many ways, as I remember a dear Indian friend that I once knew. He would always say, listen to the wind and know I am near. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
Anaya Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 7:51 PM
I appreciate your visit and kind words, my poet friend Brandy. A friend who can teach us such lovely things are a special kind of friend. Thank you, Hugs to you ~Anaya
Lawless Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 4:57 AM
Each of these couplets could be the focus of a meditation. I shall have to save and Fav this and quietly reflect on each one. Beautifully done Anaya
Anaya Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, John lawless for your thoughts about meditation. It is a contest and I used mostly spirit animals, there was no effort involved for the I's and T's form. Meditation, I didn't have that in mind, will have to try it. Thank you, for your fave! ~Anaya
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 8:02 PM
An interesting penning :)
Anaya Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, Kimmy, and thank s for the visit!
Lawrence Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 10:10 AM
Anaya, So much depth here in your words. The journey of the Native American is so rich, so deep and whispers with the earth. Beautiful .Susan :)
Anaya Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 7:47 PM
With all respect to Native Americans, I take pleasure in spiritually rich cultures and hope I do them justice in my poems. It is a wonderful journey to be a part of! Thank you, Susan Lawrence for your visit and ever so kind words. Hugs ~Anaya
May Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:41 AM
They respected Mother Earth, Nicely penned
Anaya Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 5:16 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Joseph ~Anaya
Baker Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 4:18 PM
Love your poems about Native Americans, Anaya. Excellent information and soulful writing my friend. Hugs, Bill
Anaya Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 6:34 PM
Thank you, Bill for your nice comments! Hugs
Delaney Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 3:32 PM
This is a very well written and inspirational poem, Anaya: I have always been fascinated with nature and admired lizards in many forms. As a child my Dad would show me the scary Blue Tonged Lizards in Tasmania…it would never cross our minds to kill them. Fascinating, best, SuZ
Anaya Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 6:33 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed Suzanne; I would love to hear more of your stories! Warmest wishes!
Wolf Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Every once in a while, I used to be tempted to live as the Indians do, at peace, one with nature... After spending two days 'in nature,' I usually was cured of such desires for quite a while. (And, don't laugh, I was a hardworking farmer in my twenties -- but with all the 'amenities.' lol.) ~ gw
Anaya Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 5:23 PM
Lol! I'm sure the Indians also live with peace, and one with nature like the Native Americans. ;)
George Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 9:23 PM
This seems a great entry for the contest, Anaya ! All the Best. "I am lizard, killing me brings bad luck' I thought, the belief that killing a lizard brings bad luck is a locally bound superstition. Now I know it is a universal belief. I wonder if it has any rational basis.
Anaya Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 11:38 AM
'Asian Indian' as well as 'Native American' tribes have in their mythology that Lizards play positive roles in their folklore. Today, Cheyenne, still consider it bad luck to kill a lizard. In the mythology of California Indian tribes, the (Pomo lizard) was one of the major figures of creation, who made humans partially in his image. Southwestern tribes, horned lizards (horny-toads) are considered sacred medicine animals. (Gila Monster) a powerful hero in Navajo and Southwestern legends. Other tribes, lizards are associated with protection, prosperity, renewal, and good luck. Hope this helps, Valsa!
Buehler Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 5:04 PM
A sensational poem and a fine contest contender. Love the picture, too. Good luck. Evelyn :)
Anaya Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 5:56 PM
Thank you, Evelyn for the encouraging comments. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 2:07 AM
Lovely picture and lovely verse. I've just seen the film "The Prey". a bit of horror but I like them that way.
Anaya Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:01 PM
Danny Trejo (Machete) I believe is in it! Thank you, Victor, for your encouraging comments. :)
Gorelick Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 6:28 PM
Clever stirring and an original fun learning experience! Robert
Anaya Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:04 PM
Thank you, Robert, for your kind and encouraging comments! Best to you
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