Get Your Premium Membership

Lightning They Name Is Woman

there is a tree in the forest
targeted by lightning in a storm
ten times more likely to get hit
than any other tree

because lightning has a “type”
like men have a “type”
she goes after an oak
six times more often than any other tree

no one knows why
because they have forgotten that lightning is a woman
who wants to destroy the sturdy and the strong
she wants to take down a man

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/3/2023 7:54:00 AM
I agree with John, A powerful poem. Your pencil must be made of oak. You have lightning in your words.
Login to Reply
Krutsinger Avatar
Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/4/2023 1:41:00 AM
thank you Jerry
Date: 8/3/2023 4:57:00 AM
WOW...and another ....WOW....Damn Caren, this poem strikes ...... like lightning. gave a bit of a chill. A definite FAVE!!!
Login to Reply
Krutsinger Avatar
Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/4/2023 1:42:00 AM
thank you John I appreciate it

Book: Reflection on the Important Things