Lightning They Name Is Woman

there is a tree in the forest
targeted by lightning in a storm
ten times more likely to get hit
than any other tree

because lightning has a “type”
like men have a “type”
she goes after an oak
six times more often than any other tree

no one knows why
because they have forgotten that lightning is a woman
who wants to destroy the sturdy and the strong
she wants to take down a man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Brotherton Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 7:54 AM
I agree with John, A powerful poem. Your pencil must be made of oak. You have lightning in your words.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 1:41 AM
thank you Jerry
Lawless Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 4:57 AM
WOW...and another ....WOW....Damn Caren, this poem strikes ...... like lightning. gave a bit of a chill. A definite FAVE!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 1:42 AM
thank you John I appreciate it
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