Dark Sunrise

The cup reminds me
 I’m getting older
The coffee hints
A bit more bolder

No milk, no cream
Just pour it steamin’
Caress the warm cup
While I’m dreamin’

The last sip cold
I’ll gladly slurp
And thank it loudly
With a burp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 3/23/2025 5:07:00 AM
Hilarious, I was not prepared for the burp.
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Date: 3/22/2025 8:59:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Music to my ears. ~ Wyatt Burp
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Date: 3/22/2025 10:54:00 AM
Dear John, I was lulled into your coffee experience to be caught by the last line twist haha! Wonderful! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/22/2025 9:23:00 AM
What a fun, lighthearted read. I'm lifting my coffee cup to salute your words and wait - wait - nope, no burp to be heard. Really enjoyed this wee write ... CayCay
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Date: 3/22/2025 5:30:00 AM
You were so deep in thought enjoying the warmth of your morning cup that I wasn't prepared for your burp. lol John. A warm opening and a cold ending that left me smiling.
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