John Lawless Poet Rhyme

Dark Sunrise

The cup reminds me
 I’m getting older
The coffee hints
A bit more bolder

No milk, no cream
Just pour it steamin’
Caress the warm cup
While I’m dreamin’

The last sip cold
I’ll gladly slurp
And thank it loudly
With a burp

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Jerry Brotherton March 23, 2025 at 5:07 AM Hilarious, I was not prepared for the burp.

Gershon Wolf March 22, 2025 at 8:59 PM Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Music to my ears. ~ Wyatt Burp

Susan Ashley March 22, 2025 at 10:54 AM Dear John, I was lulled into your coffee experience to be caught by the last line twist haha! Wonderful! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

CayCay Godwin March 22, 2025 at 9:23 AM What a fun, lighthearted read. I'm lifting my coffee cup to salute your words and wait - wait - nope, no burp to be heard. Really enjoyed this wee write ... CayCay

Lin Lane March 22, 2025 at 5:30 AM You were so deep in thought enjoying the warmth of your morning cup that I wasn't prepared for your burp. lol John. A warm opening and a cold ending that left me smiling.