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P H E W

As the heat subsided A cool grayness crept in Exhausted shadows slept Limp leaves exhaled hope Open windows inhaled it

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Date: 6/28/2025 9:07:00 PM
Waiting to inhale... I take comfort in your words. OK., small comfort then... ~ gw
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Date: 6/26/2025 4:11:00 PM
nicely said, john! it hasn't subsided enough for me, but it's a start...
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Date: 6/26/2025 12:05:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "P H E W" write. Way tooooooo hot here. I would love some cool weather. Please send over. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 6/26/2025 5:35:00 AM
We are in the grips of a freezing weather front down at the foot of Africa. I'll swap you anyday.
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