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The Souls of Leaves

"Dead leaves lay still until the wind takes them here and there: even the last flower is withered: yet there is a beauty in decay. " Quote by _Constance La France Though dead they be, these leaves I see beneath the giant maple tree - are not just lying on the ground devoid completely of their sound! They can be heard to some degree. They seem an odd, browned potpourri, but when wind hunts them like a hound, their whispered pleas cannot be drowned though they be dead. On breath of wind, and like debri, these leaves with crispy voices flee to other places. Scattered round, it’s back into the earth they’re bound like us! But oh, their souls are free though they be dead.

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Date: 6/19/2023 7:55:00 AM
Ah, love this Andrea! Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 6/12/2023 4:06:00 PM
Andrea, this one is superb. I really loved it. Best of luck in the contest!!
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 6/12/2023 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations for this well deserved poem..
Date: 6/12/2023 6:56:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/12/2023 5:52:00 AM
Andrea, how beautifully penned, and thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations on your win, and it is great to see my quote inspired your poem !
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Date: 6/12/2023 2:36:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Hi. I turned to this entry because I saw the word soul and I had to turn the page. I didn't know what I would read but this is poetry in the truest fashion with expression and tone. It is also an entry that should be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Be proud of this execution. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings (smile)
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Date: 6/11/2023 10:29:00 PM
"They seem an odd, browned potpourri," Love this line. There is music in the rustle of dead leaves. Beautiful poem Andrea ! Congratulations on your first place win
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Date: 6/11/2023 10:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest ...Andrea. Wonderful poem
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Date: 6/11/2023 4:27:00 PM
I love the flow on this one Andrea. Beautiful poem of description and the anthropomorphism of the leaves is perfect. Nicely done! Congrats!
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Date: 6/11/2023 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. A wonderful picture of souls of leaves ! I hear their "whispered pleas", and "crispy voices".
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Date: 6/11/2023 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have blessed day/week...........
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Date: 6/10/2023 10:53:00 AM
Well done, Andrea and wish you all the luck. Such a simple poem but still deep in thought.
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Date: 6/10/2023 6:12:00 AM
Love it, Andrea. Well done! Best, John
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Date: 6/9/2023 5:08:00 PM
You have touched the departing leaves's soul. Nice poem.
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Date: 6/9/2023 3:51:00 AM
Hi, the flow is as lovely as the words. xx
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Date: 6/8/2023 1:50:00 PM
WAY TO GO ANDREA!!!! SILKY SMOOTH with a pointed edge...a definite FAVE, see you at the top....
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