Enthusiasm


For Sotto Poet's  E  Words Contest
17 June 24
POTD. First Prize
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"Enthusiasm is nothing more or less than faith in action" -- Henry Chester

I cling to reveries of youth, the tender sentiment of plucking words from summer roots,
That in my journal hours when the red
of skies are agleam...phrases extend long   long as straw.

I burn language the way one does in
a flamed trance--amused,  enthused, 
seduced--  reeling into a daze beneath 
a new moon,    a blur of penciled happenstance flapping like a winged feather on river of late afternoons.  

I would still scribble in hay where syllables grow into racy tunes , my faith abiding in passion deep...
And I could not help myself but drown
my hands in raw and humid lines;

Bury my eyes deep in verses' jammed.
I'm loathed to leave my untamed story
when twilight fades. Still and all, letters
drip and tradewinds see  blown paper

curling like blotted fingertips!
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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 10:03 PM
I noticed your poem of same title as mine is right above mine on the 100 best new poems list and also it's a POTD. Big congrats. It is a beautiful poem
George Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 9:34 AM
"I burn language the way one does in a flamed trance--amused, enthused, seduced-- reeling into a daze beneath a new moon"--- Wow! A series of lovely metaphors are aligned in a row. Your style is unique. Let words flow from you and your story thrill the readers' mind. Enjoyed much, dear Nette.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Back with Congratulations on your New win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Enthusiasm" write/quote again. Have a blessed day with your New win..............
Rodrigues Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 5:45 AM
How wonderful to see magnificent words on “paper.” Your poetry enlivens my spirit! …and now I see you have POTD! Congrats, Nette!
Delaney Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 4:27 AM
A beautiful river of metaphors, Nette. Very deserving of POTD and your top placement. Thankful you are back. hugs, SuZ
Roper Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 12:26 AM
Nette, your poem, stunning. Congratulations on POTD.
Mcintosh Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 11:24 PM
Simply amazing. Definitely a winner!!! I just love this. God bless you, love, Gina - oh, and congrats for your top win and POTD.
Alex Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 10:44 PM
A very grand poem. Congratulations!
Agustin Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 10:32 PM
Wow! Congrats, Kabayan. Thanks for sharing your enthusiasm-inspired muse, worthy of POTD and first placement. God bless you.
Bartley Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 9:25 PM
It was a pleasure reading your POTD. Best one yet though all your poems make ME FEEL better about life, except this one. But I still love it. Right on theme.
Nicole Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 7:37 PM
Your ' Enthusiasm ' brings a smile, Nette. :) So wonderful seeing your words again. I like this line: ' I would still scribble in hay where syllables grow.' I can definitely relate. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Greenhough Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:47 PM
This is a vibrant insight into the mind of a poet. Congratulations on POTD.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honour. Your lines are magical, dancing with exuberance of beauty!
Kauffman Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Nette, what a joy to share in your poetic artistry again! Superb, fresh, original imagery blended into each line - each verse creating a "journal" of loveliness. If this is for a contest, best wishes! Congratulations on your POTD! Well deserved.
Wolf Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Had a feeling you would soon be honored with POTD, Nette. Great to see you posting again. Joy and Jubilation, Gershon
Slaughter Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 10:22 AM
I love the first line, Nette...and the rest of this piece as well. Congrats on POTD, and BOL in the contest.
Bowring Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Many congratulations Nette for POTD with this amazing poem. So well written and reflective too. Your well written lines will resonate with many. Love the imagery here too and the quote. ‘ I’m loathed to leave my untamed story when twilight fades’. Great line! Really enjoyed it.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Enthusiasm" write/quote. "Good Luck" in the contest... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win..............
Canerdy Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Nette, CONGRATS on your poem's being deemed POTD. Superb figures of speech! Janice
May Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 5:33 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
Gentile Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Nette, your lines so beautifully portray the fullest expression of the titular subject with wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your POTD honors!!!
Rodgers Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 4:15 AM
Dear Nette, I can really feel your poem dance with the spirit of youth. Creating words that bloom in the summer. I love how your enthusiasm sings in each line, inspiring and captivating. Congratulations on POTD! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Edmonds  Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 1:44 AM
Beautiful poetry Nette, congratulations on receiving the honour for poem of the day… Beryl
Kaufman Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 1:30 AM
Dear Nette, Congratulations on this very passionate POTD, so well penned. Enjoy your honor Ms. Poetess..
Parker Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 4:01 PM
Nette, my poetic friend you are a joy to read again...ah the struggles of writing when the mind and emotion are not in rhythm, yet the heart pursues a purer path to find a way
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