Enthusiasm


For Sotto Poet's  E  Words Contest
17 June 24

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"Enthusiasm is nothing more or less than faith in action" -- Henry Chester

I cling to reveries of youth, the tender sentiment of plucking words from summer roots,
That in my journal hours when the red
of skies are agleam...phrases extend long   long as straw.

I burn language the way one does in
a flamed trance--amused,  enthused, 
seduced--  reeling into a daze beneath 
a new moon,    a blur of penciled happenstance flapping like a winged feather on river of late afternoons.  

I would still scribble in hay where syllables grow into racy tunes , my faith abiding in passion deep...
And I could not help myself but drown
my hands in raw and humid lines;

Bury my eyes deep in verses' jammed.
I'm loathed to leave my untamed story
when twilight fades. Still and all, letters
drip and tradewinds see  blown paper

curling like blotted fingertips!

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Date: 8/8/2024 10:03:00 PM
I noticed your poem of same title as mine is right above mine on the 100 best new poems list and also it's a POTD. Big congrats. It is a beautiful poem
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Date: 6/19/2024 9:34:00 AM
"I burn language the way one does in a flamed trance--amused, enthused, seduced-- reeling into a daze beneath a new moon"--- Wow! A series of lovely metaphors are aligned in a row. Your style is unique. Let words flow from you and your story thrill the readers' mind. Enjoyed much, dear Nette.
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Date: 6/19/2024 7:45:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your New win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Enthusiasm" write/quote again. Have a blessed day with your New win..............
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Date: 6/19/2024 5:45:00 AM
How wonderful to see magnificent words on “paper.” Your poetry enlivens my spirit! …and now I see you have POTD! Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 6/19/2024 4:27:00 AM
A beautiful river of metaphors, Nette. Very deserving of POTD and your top placement. Thankful you are back. hugs, SuZ
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Date: 6/19/2024 12:26:00 AM
Nette, your poem, stunning. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/18/2024 11:24:00 PM
Simply amazing. Definitely a winner!!! I just love this. God bless you, love, Gina - oh, and congrats for your top win and POTD.
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:44:00 PM
A very grand poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:32:00 PM
Wow! Congrats, Kabayan. Thanks for sharing your enthusiasm-inspired muse, worthy of POTD and first placement. God bless you.
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Date: 6/18/2024 9:25:00 PM
It was a pleasure reading your POTD. Best one yet though all your poems make ME FEEL better about life, except this one. But I still love it. Right on theme.
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Date: 6/18/2024 7:37:00 PM
Your ' Enthusiasm ' brings a smile, Nette. :) So wonderful seeing your words again. I like this line: ' I would still scribble in hay where syllables grow.' I can definitely relate. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/18/2024 4:47:00 PM
This is a vibrant insight into the mind of a poet. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/18/2024 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD honour. Your lines are magical, dancing with exuberance of beauty!
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:54:00 AM
Nette, what a joy to share in your poetic artistry again! Superb, fresh, original imagery blended into each line - each verse creating a "journal" of loveliness. If this is for a contest, best wishes! Congratulations on your POTD! Well deserved.
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:45:00 AM
Had a feeling you would soon be honored with POTD, Nette. Great to see you posting again. Joy and Jubilation, Gershon
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Date: 6/18/2024 10:22:00 AM
I love the first line, Nette...and the rest of this piece as well. Congrats on POTD, and BOL in the contest.
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Date: 6/18/2024 7:23:00 AM
Many congratulations Nette for POTD with this amazing poem. So well written and reflective too. Your well written lines will resonate with many. Love the imagery here too and the quote. ‘ I’m loathed to leave my untamed story when twilight fades’. Great line! Really enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/18/2024 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Enthusiasm" write/quote. "Good Luck" in the contest... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win..............
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Date: 6/18/2024 6:35:00 AM
Nette, CONGRATS on your poem's being deemed POTD. Superb figures of speech! Janice
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Date: 6/18/2024 5:33:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 6/18/2024 5:28:00 AM
Your enthusiasm for writing portrayed nicely here. Enjoy your day in the sun Nette
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Date: 6/18/2024 4:22:00 AM
Nette, your lines so beautifully portray the fullest expression of the titular subject with wonderful imagery! Congratulations on your POTD honors!!!
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Date: 6/18/2024 4:15:00 AM
Dear Nette, I can really feel your poem dance with the spirit of youth. Creating words that bloom in the summer. I love how your enthusiasm sings in each line, inspiring and captivating. Congratulations on POTD! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/18/2024 1:44:00 AM
Beautiful poetry Nette, congratulations on receiving the honour for poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 6/18/2024 1:30:00 AM
Dear Nette, Congratulations on this very passionate POTD, so well penned. Enjoy your honor Ms. Poetess..
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