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My tears, Full of sorrow, My destiny to weep; And yet, yet I find sweet beauty, In death. ____________________ June 4, 2015 Cinquain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/5/2015 2:27:00 PM
Terrific capture of the image 'Broken Wings' - haunting, yet enlightening. I so wish this little Gem all the best in Sara's contest, hugs, James :)
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Date: 6/4/2015 11:31:00 PM
Death has to be awesome Broken wings, beginning of another chapter! Great poem, Gl in contest!
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Date: 6/4/2015 6:36:00 PM
This is good. Death, indeed, is beautiful.
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Date: 6/4/2015 6:11:00 PM
OK, seriously, I hope you submitted this to the contest as it is a wonderful Cinquain. All the PS kudos - a 7 and a fav and see you at the top of the contest results.
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Date: 6/4/2015 4:42:00 PM
Absolutely beauteous! Please check out my stuff, you might like it.
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Date: 6/4/2015 2:06:00 PM
I agree Broken wings your wonderful words on this subject are indeed so so beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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