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And Still She Smiles

And still she smiles  

Even in this darkness, her darkness,
when a moonless sky
preaches fear from a pulpit of shadows
pointing elongated fingers
and walls crumble 
into a rubble strewn alleyway
with graffiti issues, spray painted threats
on frantic facades dripping. . .

common sense
hides in sealed envelopes
addressed but not delivered
to neighborhoods in need
while self professed wanderers 
linger on sidewalks of 
washed out hopscotch scenes
by a raincloud that never seems to stop  

Her beauty shines
in effervescent streams
illuminating a photograph, poetry
and a kind word from quivering lips
caressing my eyes
in watercolor enchantments
and pastel pleasures,
showing me it is not what, but who. . .

for this darkness is hers,
weighted thoughts on soft shoulders
binding wrists in tethered worries,
draining dreams from casted wishes
and as regrets rip at the fabric,
folding seams in crooked stitches, 
her heart continues to outrun the pain
and still she smiles,  for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 30, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Very touching and beautifully written my friend.. Something most all of us do at some point... Arlene
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December 30, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Thanks so very much Arlene. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
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December 29, 2016 at 12:21 AM
What a great title. What a portrait of a woman you have created. The second stanza is my favorite, or i guess the third if you include the first line as a stanza.
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December 29, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Thanks so very much, I am thrilled you liked this one.
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December 28, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Hi Chris, What a good message you have crafted within this poem. Although it's very hard to do, one can smile no matter how bleak it looks. Sometimes one may have to smile when they don't feel like it(laughter and smiles have a positive effect.A without seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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December 28, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Sometimes it is very hard to do, but it is also so important to try. Thank you my dear friend Alexis. I always smile when you stop by, no matter what. :)
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December 28, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Chris, I really like this because it includes the hard edge of the world, before we even start thinking about the rainbow, begrimed shadows and the pain before the smile. We always want to change the past, and we can't.
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December 28, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Thanks Doug, that's reality and I know it. We all have shadows and monkeys clinging to our backs, but as long as we have a friend we can count on...it makes things so much easier.
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December 28, 2016 at 11:11 AM
True love is the strongest courage and always smiles no matter how dark the world around us or the world within us is. Beautiful poem, Chris.
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December 28, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Thank you so much Christy. With true love, anything is possible.
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December 28, 2016 at 9:42 AM
The brave will cheer at their highlights in life and smile at their worse.They hide their tears so well from the crowd.They live darkness with a candle in hand...especially on a moonless night.. I love this poem...It carries depth and for so many reasons it tpuches my heart.Thanks for bringing us smiles even on yr moonless nights as well.A fave.
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December 28, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Yes, you are correct my friend, it is all how you look at it or see it would be the better thing to say. But, as long as there is a friend who will stand by us no matter what, it is so much easier to get past the darkness and rejoice in the light. Thank you so very much Charmaine.
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December 28, 2016 at 9:04 AM
IN--F..KIN'----CREDIBLE!!!! Damn Chris this is a beautiful, yet deeply painful and joyously devastating write.
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December 28, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Thanks so very much John. I guess that means you liked it, huh? :) I appreciate your always encouraging comments my friend.
Smith Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Smiles are what make the world worthwhile... Great poem Chris
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December 28, 2016 at 9:46 AM
That's for sure Tim. If smiles were currency, I'd wish everyone to be rich.
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December 28, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Wow Chris. Excellent. I can identify with this. Very well written.
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December 28, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Thanks so very much Heidi. I hope you smiled along with me. : )
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