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Where The River Cries

The poet hears the river’s cry In the flow of waters going by Ebb and flow, calm and storm The poet finds the river’s form In verse – in words that soothe and lift The river’s wound the water shifts – From idle streams on mountain keeps To waterfalls that never sleep And brooks that ease through valleys by, Which understand the river’s cry, To the river flowing ever on To the verse, the poem and the poet’s song – Oh, the poet knows the river’s cry In the verse it lays at waterside Nearer now than the muse it knows For the poet knows the verses flow From the flow of waters going by Where the river goes, where the river cries

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Date: 5/20/2024 9:18:00 PM
Truly an awe-inspiring read for me, John. Especially impressive is how you've sustained and embellished the winding, twisting metaphor. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 5/17/2024 11:52:00 PM
Dear John, this is an outstanding, captivating poem from the first word to the very last. Wonderful flow, like the river itself and perfect rhyme to create poetic, delightful and reflective couplets. I love the opening line especially - well, I love all of them as you get swept along with the rivers journey. Your word flow is so clever. I’ve enjoyed it and admired it so much that I’m faving it too. Very impressed. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you :)
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John Oldham
Date: 5/18/2024 5:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind and generous overview of this poem, Christina! I tried so hard to get that flow, too - it took me a long time to get it right. Glad you enjoyed it! Warm Regards, John
Date: 5/12/2024 4:04:00 PM
I shall have to fave this John as it caught me in its flow and carried me to ends forever destination. Beautifully done
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John Oldham
Date: 5/15/2024 3:39:00 AM
Happy to hear, John! Thanks for your thoughts.

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