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Intrusive Thoughts

Intruders Invasive interlopers Encroaching on the edge Of thought Prowlers invading The sanctity of the soul Clumsy burglars Violating the boundaries Of whispered secrets Purring cat burglars Seeking comfort

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2025 8:02:00 PM

Horace and Jasper depicted well here. ~ Cruella da Ville

Tom Woody

Date: 6/5/2025 10:28:00 AM

AI is here to stay as I've said before. We don't have to like it. But there's bigger problems on planet earth. Way bigger. Nevertheless, you've made a valid poetic point

Karen Jones

Date: 6/5/2025 10:06:00 AM

Yes these kinds of thought both interrupt and can also inspire poetry. Cool poem!

Lin Lane

Date: 6/5/2025 10:01:00 AM

hmmm... sound like what I've been complaining about. Encroachers poaching... definitely an unwanted invading species. Lovin' it, John. Validation code is AAI Ironic.