Your Name

It has you walking home
from school, past that house
where the front room curtains
moved yet revealed no face behind
only the trace of a shadow
stepping back into your mind -
the sound of footsteps that followed
and stopped when your feet
froze to the ground and,
on looking around, no-one
was there 

and now,
stepping through time,
that dull echo on empty streets
late at night when far from home
and sleep, you get
a sense that someone
is still following, 
so near now
you can almost hear
those icy lips whispering 
your name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 6:29 AM
A FAVE,,,A FAVE....STP THE PRESSES - WAKE THE ALGORITHM.....it had me looking over my shoulder from first line to last......and a metaphoric GOTCHA...in the end
Willason Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 5:40 AM
Too kind in your words John....though accepted with gratitude. Appreciated.
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