Untitled No 28

I don’t know how to swim,
but I can swim well
Ask me to teach you how to solve
a problem, and I am stumped
but tell me to move a mountain
and I will push it out of your way
I can do so much more
than I can explain
I feel so much more
than my words can express
and my body knows
my muscles know
every aching sinew knows
how to do so many things
ride bikes
shoot guns
arm wrestle
thumb wrestle
climb mountains
push, pull, squat, and stretch
but if you asked me how
I wouldn’t know how to tell you.
You would think having so many words
would make it easier!
but it makes it worse.
What if I can’t explain how I’m feeling
in English 
so I think what’s the Russian word for that?
only I know deep in my brain
I should be using the French word
which I also can’t remember,
but only because Spanish doesn’t have
the word for it, 
and I don’t speak German 
So imagine - 
everyone around me drowning,
me, for the first time, swimming,
but I can’t help anyone
because I don’t even know
a stroke.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 9/28/2024 1:49:00 PM
I'm up for thumb wrestling anytime. Then I'll thump you in ping pong. Jus sayin
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/28/2024 2:56:00 PM
Ha!
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Daniel Bailey
Date: 9/28/2024 2:40:00 PM
I’ll school you in thumb wrestling, old man. And then you can thump me at ping pong.
Date: 9/28/2024 8:40:00 AM
WOW...I must FAVE this as it answers so many questions that it wasn't asked....a marvelous expose' of "just do it".....
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Daniel Bailey
Date: 9/28/2024 10:59:00 AM
Thank you, John! I appreciate your kind words!
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