Point taken

He would lie to them then swear on his word
The gold in his pants a short but sharp sword
Then with his sly grin
He would draw them in
Claim he’d a very cool way of climbing aboard
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Brotherton Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 5:05 AM
OOOweee. Love this limerick, my friend.
Wolf Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 8:58 PM
O, John. You didn't... Yes, you did. ~ gw
Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 7:32 PM
I enjoyed your powerful Limerick write. Both good/bad words are very powerful. Have a blessed and fun weekend writing away..............
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 5:40 PM
sharp ink John lol I especially love the punch line x! hugs jan xx
Bartley Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 3:51 PM
Thanks for sharing!
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