Painting With Words

Painting with Words

If I were an artist instead of a poet
I’d paint what I knew as others would know it.

I’d be a Renoir and never a Klee
I’d paint what I saw as others would see.

If I were a painting instead of a poem
I’d use vivid colors on flowers or crone.

It’s the texture that matters , the curl of the line
Not the meter or syntax or even the rhyme.

I’d paint up a heaven, bright stars in the sky.
My colors would dazzle and make people cry.

I’d paint with abandon but nothing too styled.
I’d paint a dog barking, the cry of a child.

The blush of the morning, awash with the dew,
The eyes of a lover I’d capture for you.

But I’m just a poem, a small little rhyme
So I’ll paint with my words while you paint with your mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guzik Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 11:22 PM
Dear Mr. Jordan, Wonderful piece, such a set of words put together here for us to reflect upon. I adore the way the author composed this, it flows so well as if it was done with help from above. Thank You for writing this Mr. Jordan. I feel blessed by reading your work.
Cloyd Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Richard, I thought your poem was beautiful.
Drowley Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 3:05 PM
Richard, Excellent poetry. Caused me to imagine many things. Keep up the good work!
Cab Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 5:40 PM
I really enjoy your work, Keep up the good work.
Fenn Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 4:40 PM
Excellent poem Richard!
Schack Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 2:52 PM
As both an artist and poet.love this.see,feedback mine or see my art on Facebook.peace pal.
Bahr Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 1:42 PM
enjoyed thank you for sharing.
Lawrence Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Richard, You make me smile, a much bigger smile than Mona. I love your "painting." You put the art itself vividly into words.
Calasibetta Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 12:41 PM
You truly are an artist with words. Lovely poem that speaks to me..... Blessings, Paulette
Shepard Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 12:29 PM
Excellent! I loved every line. Beautifully written.
Ryder Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Indeed a poem of note. Many thanks.
Harrold Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Beautiful :-)
Shaw Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 11:04 AM
This is lovely, Richard, a little poem that leads to the bigger picture, sweet . . . : )
Scragg Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Hello Richard. Very clever and vivid painted poem. Brilliant. Thanks for sharing this one :)
Liguori Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 10:44 AM
One of my favorite poems! Ill read this again and again. (Which I have already) You have a new follower.
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:07 PM
Beautiful poem, Richard. So glad to have found it in the pages of the 2020 PS Anthology ~
Jent Avatar
May 7, 2017 at 4:15 PM
If you were a painter then a gallery I would own. Your poetry has painted an everlasting thought, worth more than I own. Thanks for the thoughts
Clark Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Lovely poem Richard. As a painting, good texture with depth and colour and flowing lines. An intelligent poem and well thought out. Regards Edward
Hay Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 4:09 AM
Reading this again, makes it seem all the better!
Jordan Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Laura for visiting again. I see you are still very active since I visited your first Triolet. Always improving and gaining fans. Keep writing!
Clark Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 3:07 PM
Hi Richard, a poem that rhymes very well and a simply put refresher; like playing the piano, your words sweeping the keyboard with nonchalance. Edward
Clark Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 1:12 PM
Hi Richard, yes foy is a good word and an inspirational one as it fitted perfectly for the meaning I wanted. Regards Edward
Jordan Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 11:54 AM
Thanks, Edward. I left a note on your newest poem but also enjoyed the older poems very much. I also learned a new word-Foy.
Mcunu Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 12:35 AM
wow great work
Jordan Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Thanks, zakhe. I picked my favorite from your many great poems--Mother of All. The last line says it all beautifully..."And sing my last rhymes of sweet poetry".
Nunez Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 5:23 PM
And what a beautiful picture it is you have painted. Congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD! Kim
Jordan Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Thanks, Kim. Your comment led me to your poems, which are great! For the third time, after reading Surf n' Summer, I am inspired to try a Triolet.
Maverick Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 3:55 PM
Enjoying the scene here Richard, great stuff.. 7 for sure..' & congrats on the feature..!
Jordan Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 9:02 AM
Thanks, Joe and thanks for the comment on Sun Speckled Pond. I enjoy your poems, the internal rhyming and enjambment. My college motto was "Vox Clamantis in Deserto" (a voice crying in the wilderness). Loved that poem.
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 2:32 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Richard ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Thanks, Anne Lise. You have inspired me to try the Kimo format with Sweet Moon and Queen of the Forest!
Allison Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 1:45 PM
you painted a wonderful picture - I am no artist but like you I can paint pictures with my words:-) great choice for poem of the day - congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Jordan Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Thanks, Jan. You have been a wonderful supporter since I joined and it is really appreciated. And, YES, you certainly can paint pictures with your words!
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