DAWN

Dawn Weakly Tweaks the curve Its chilly yawn Turns off the street lights As darkness returns home Sparrows sing morning vespers A coffee scented mist rises Silently swirling atop the mug Daybreaks pheromonal invitation

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/19/2025 11:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "DAWN" write. What a great time of the day. Happy Easter... Have a blessed day with your win.......

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/18/2025 4:10:00 AM

lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Ink Empress

Date: 4/17/2025 1:35:00 PM

Dear John, This is beautiful and so creatively done too, one that i didnt want to end, and wished would go on and on, but its impressive how in few lines youv delivered one that is so very descriptive! Your use of the word "yawn" stood out the most for me! You definitely have a way with words! Thank you for joining! Congratulations on your win. Sending you light always

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/9/2025 5:57:00 PM

Jst love 'Dawn... its chilly yawn.' Amen, brother. ~ Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2025 12:57:00 PM

- What a wonderful start to the day, John :) - Best wishes in the contest :) -