A Little Caveman Reasoning

I have always liked the hollow dark,
the cave, the sealed carcass of the night,
the lightless womb of the closed seed.

You said you were human,
and I laughed until my belly shook the earth.
I Imagined your bones cracking
from the heat of a great fire.

I ground my teeth with the ash
of a few brittle words.

"No one is 'human',
we are alien seeds replanted,
into a fertile blindness.

Humans are the shells,
the pods, the skin of a reality
they have yet to realize or reveal.

The garden,
what you call 'soul',
is a transplanted being,
it lives concealed,
within that alien you.

Keep that garden,
hidden from any who would,
proudly claim to be
remotely human!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 3/2/2024 1:23:00 PM
An interesting write, indeed!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 3/2/2024 1:40:00 PM
Hi Kim, thank you for this response. Appreciated. E.
Date: 3/2/2024 11:46:00 AM
WOW, Eric, this is fantastic, I shall FAVE it as it must be kept, tended, allowed to grow, to fuel the imagination and make me think again about all that I "think" i know.....
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Eric Ashford
Date: 3/2/2024 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, John, often the sub-conscious mind throws us a bone of truth! When we for a few moments resist clinging to this objectified world and mine of ours. Thanks for the warm response and kind review. Best E. By the way have fixed the typo!
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