Premiere Contest WinnerSnowflakes


There's a magic in snowflakes, 
yet their majesty is only momentary -

just like you, 
                  just like me...

They fall 
        so elegantly,
                 like enchanting  
       ballet dancers,
                 shapeshifting 
in the air, 
       floating in a 
                 bitter breeze,

                 so soft, 
                 so tender,
                 so fragile, 
                      so  
                 vulnerable.

                Gently 
                      d
                       e 
                      s 
                       c
                      e
                       n
                      d
                       i
                      n
                       g
                       
                      side 
                        by 
                      side

                                like 
                              unique 
                         pearls settling 
                    upon empty surfaces
                        spreading softly
                            on spotless 
                              emerald 
                                fields                         
                            
Rain is the  
             enemy of beauty, 
the sun a 
             jealous confidant. 
Drops of mercy 
may feed nature, 
but their influx 
results in a massacre. 
Their cunning conduct 
is hidden behind 
an illusion known
                        as the rainbow.

Snowflakes do not bleed red, they discolour into ashen slush, their remains hardening in death, frozen, until melting into nothingness.
There is a tragedy in snowflakes, which recurs time after time, yet we keep faith in our seasons, just like my life, just like yours.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 6:36 AM
I think it looks really cool this way. i know i have tried in the past to play around with verses' formats. Some people really seem to like that. Congrats on a trophy win
Jones Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Back to say congratulations on a win!
Poet Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win in Brian's contest, my friend.
Croft Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations! Lovely poem!
Empress Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 2:07 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win in brians contest! Well deserved! I love this
M  Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 12:19 PM
Well done and Congratulations on POTD SO! Debx
Nicole Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:05 PM
Such a cute video, it made me smile so big. :) Snowflakes are unique, and I find that fascinating, because that's just one example given to show how different we are. Your thoughts hold meaning and depth. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
McBride  Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Congratulations on POTD, this is truly beautiful , captivating unto the life of this snowflake, so much knowledge, wisdom and truth in your poem to gain unto everyday life
Watt Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 3:56 PM
SO, a lovely piece reflecting on the magic and tragedy of the temporal nature of snowflakes and some sublime parallels between them and the human condition. Congrats for your POTD, glad I read this today. You are an inspiration ~ John
Doll Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 3:19 PM
Wonderful poem! Congratulations on POTD~ Warren.
Anaya Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 2:23 PM
No two snowflakes are alike. Just like us! Faithful are the seasons and so are we. Congratulations on your POTD Silent One! Touching piece
Buehler Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Hearty congratulations on POTD! A beautiful poem, Silent One. :)
Baker Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Deep thoughts produced this insightful POTD. Congratulations on the POTD honor, Silent One. I enjoyed your poem and the wisdom within it. Enjoy your day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Slaughter Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 11:30 AM
Quite lovely, S O. I love a good soft snowfall. Congrats on POTD, as well.
Zimmerman Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Hello SO, congratulations on the POTD award. Poetry is based on verbal images and the images in this poem are so clear. The parallels you have drawn are meaningful and easily recognizable. Well done. ZIM
Kitchin Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 9:45 AM
SO, congratulations on POTD.
Roper Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 9:43 AM
Brilliant. You always surprise me with every poem I read of yours. Congratulations on POTD
Sharma  Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Snowflakes..Ah, such beautiful elements that have fascinated me since forever! If this isn't true art and the essence of poetry then I don't know what is!Dear Silent One, you've actually captured the resplendent essence of the snowflakes here and blended their myriad impacts in a delicate weaving of words which describes the meanings in a very philosophical way which one can fathom only after diving in those fleeting moments..I loveee everything about this poem,"There is a tragedy in snowflakes"
Sharma  Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 8:50 AM
And that special part about the cunning conduct of the rain and the sun.. Woah, that is sincerely, so breathtaking!! "Snowflakes do not bleed red, they discolour into ashen slush" Oh my, I can go on and on, and perhaps quote every word here.. Truly, a magnificent piece and well-deserved of POTD, heartiest congratulations! :)
Fowler Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Winsome and spiritual. Love the personification...faith, "...just like you, just like me..." Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Edmonds  Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:38 AM
There is magic in snowflakes, a lovely poem Silent One. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Back With Congratulation On Your POTD Win. I enjoyed reading this magical  "Snowflakes" write again. Have a great/blessed day with your wonderful win.....................
Gentile Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:43 AM
The fragile beauty of snowflakes is matched by your glorious lines Silent One! A delightful selection for POTD, congratulations!
May Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 6:10 AM
"They fall so elegantly, like enchanting ballet dancers," Congrats on POTD Silent
Pandit Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 5:56 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your well deserved POTD, SO. Enjoy your special day, today.
Culverhouse Avatar
December 6, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Congratulations for POTD and a well expressed write it is
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