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There's a magic in snowflakes, yet their majesty is only momentary - just like you, just like me... They fall so elegantly, like enchanting ballet dancers, shapeshifting in the air, floating in a bitter breeze, so soft, so tender, so fragile, so vulnerable. Gently d e s c e n d i n g side by side like unique pearls settling upon empty surfaces spreading softly on spotless emerald fields Rain is the enemy of beauty, the sun a jealous confidant. Drops of mercy may feed nature, but their influx results in a massacre. Their cunning conduct is hidden behind an illusion known as the rainbow.
Snowflakes do not bleed red, they discolour into ashen slush, their remains hardening in death, frozen, until melting into nothingness.
There is a tragedy in snowflakes, which recurs time after time, yet we keep faith in our seasons, just like my life, just like yours.

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Date: 1/9/2024 6:36:00 AM
I think it looks really cool this way. i know i have tried in the past to play around with verses' formats. Some people really seem to like that. Congrats on a trophy win
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Date: 1/8/2024 9:43:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on a win!
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Date: 1/8/2024 7:31:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win in Brian's contest, my friend.
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations! Lovely poem!
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Date: 1/8/2024 2:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win in brians contest! Well deserved! I love this
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Date: 12/7/2023 12:19:00 PM
Well done and Congratulations on POTD SO! Debx
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:05:00 PM
Such a cute video, it made me smile so big. :) Snowflakes are unique, and I find that fascinating, because that's just one example given to show how different we are. Your thoughts hold meaning and depth. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/6/2023 5:01:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, this is truly beautiful , captivating unto the life of this snowflake, so much knowledge, wisdom and truth in your poem to gain unto everyday life
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Date: 12/6/2023 3:56:00 PM
SO, a lovely piece reflecting on the magic and tragedy of the temporal nature of snowflakes and some sublime parallels between them and the human condition. Congrats for your POTD, glad I read this today. You are an inspiration ~ John
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Date: 12/6/2023 3:19:00 PM
Wonderful poem! Congratulations on POTD~ Warren.
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Date: 12/6/2023 2:23:00 PM
No two snowflakes are alike. Just like us! Faithful are the seasons and so are we. Congratulations on your POTD Silent One! Touching piece
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Date: 12/6/2023 1:39:00 PM
Hearty congratulations on POTD! A beautiful poem, Silent One. :)
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Date: 12/6/2023 1:27:00 PM
Deep thoughts produced this insightful POTD. Congratulations on the POTD honor, Silent One. I enjoyed your poem and the wisdom within it. Enjoy your day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Date: 12/6/2023 11:30:00 AM
Quite lovely, S O. I love a good soft snowfall. Congrats on POTD, as well.
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Date: 12/6/2023 9:48:00 AM
Hello SO, congratulations on the POTD award. Poetry is based on verbal images and the images in this poem are so clear. The parallels you have drawn are meaningful and easily recognizable. Well done. ZIM
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Date: 12/6/2023 9:45:00 AM
SO, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 12/6/2023 9:43:00 AM
Brilliant. You always surprise me with every poem I read of yours. Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 12/6/2023 8:48:00 AM
Snowflakes..Ah, such beautiful elements that have fascinated me since forever! If this isn't true art and the essence of poetry then I don't know what is!Dear Silent One, you've actually captured the resplendent essence of the snowflakes here and blended their myriad impacts in a delicate weaving of words which describes the meanings in a very philosophical way which one can fathom only after diving in those fleeting moments..I loveee everything about this poem,"There is a tragedy in snowflakes"
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Date: 12/6/2023 8:50:00 AM
And that special part about the cunning conduct of the rain and the sun.. Woah, that is sincerely, so breathtaking!! "Snowflakes do not bleed red, they discolour into ashen slush" Oh my, I can go on and on, and perhaps quote every word here.. Truly, a magnificent piece and well-deserved of POTD, heartiest congratulations! :)
Date: 12/6/2023 8:07:00 AM
Winsome and spiritual. Love the personification...faith, "...just like you, just like me..." Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 12/6/2023 7:38:00 AM
There is magic in snowflakes, a lovely poem Silent One. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 12/6/2023 7:06:00 AM
Back With Congratulation On Your POTD Win. I enjoyed reading this magical  "Snowflakes" write again. Have a great/blessed day with your wonderful win.....................
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:43:00 AM
The fragile beauty of snowflakes is matched by your glorious lines Silent One! A delightful selection for POTD, congratulations!
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:10:00 AM
"They fall so elegantly, like enchanting ballet dancers," Congrats on POTD Silent
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Date: 12/6/2023 5:56:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your well deserved POTD, SO. Enjoy your special day, today.
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Date: 12/6/2023 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD and a well expressed write it is
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