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We Were Waiting

We were waiting on the platform, Our patience disintegrating, To avoid the thunderstorm, We were waiting, The sky had been reverberating As it threatened to transform Into chaos devastating, A dark departure from the norm; We were sick of hesitating, But there was no one to inform We were waiting. 8/5/20 "Strand New 17" B. Strand

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Date: 8/5/2020 9:48:00 PM
I like your word choices here, Beth, especially 'reverberating' and 'devastating' -
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Beth Evans
Date: 8/6/2020 5:13:00 PM
Thanks very much, Michelle.