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Verse - Whimsical Fantasy

By night, I load my wonder-boat with kegs of creative invention, I slip anchor, and giggling, I scamper free From the drudgery of possessions. 30 October 2018 For Three Lines Writing Challenge Sponsored by Dear Heart - Broken Wings

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Date: 11/5/2018 5:50:00 AM
Oh so whimsical Nina! Long it's ksgs of creativity and not rum lol :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 11/7/2018 1:16:00 AM
Thanks Jan! I’ll liad with rum on the return trip when I realise that kegs of creativity are wonderful but verrrrrry impractical! :-)
Date: 11/3/2018 12:34:00 PM
Nina, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 11/3/2018 5:44:00 PM
Thank you Constance - you had such fantastic and diverse entries for this contest, I was thrilled with the placement! Nina :o)
Date: 11/3/2018 12:27:00 PM
Whimsical fancy! I love it :))) Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 11/3/2018 5:43:00 PM
We like em whimsical... thank you Mo, very much appreciated. Nina :-)
Date: 11/2/2018 2:15:00 AM
- Great three lines, Nina :) -Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 11/3/2018 5:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise! Nina :-)
Date: 11/1/2018 8:18:00 PM
this is REALLY good, Nina. one of the smartest on the list. Congrats to a talented lady.
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 11/3/2018 5:43:00 PM
Wow, thank you Andrea, very kind. Nina :-)
Date: 11/1/2018 5:29:00 PM
I loved this one Nina. But don't you try and tell me that you didn't slip pen and paper on the boat with you!
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 11/3/2018 5:42:00 PM
True, true, all that giggling and scampering is bound to inspire some poetry! Thanks Wendy! Nina :-)
Date: 11/1/2018 11:05:00 AM
Take a trip and never leave the farm, that's what we with great imagination do! I love how poetically you stated this, beautiful lines of expression. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 11/3/2018 5:42:00 PM
Thank you very much CayCay! (I'm not actually allowed to leave the farm!!)
Date: 10/30/2018 5:01:00 PM
This is so wonderful- I must FAV it!! ;)
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 10/30/2018 5:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Rhona!
Date: 10/30/2018 12:25:00 PM
You gotta love those kegs of creative invention. : ) I loved this one Nina and I think it will do very well in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/30/2018 12:29:00 PM
I don't know really...I think your choice of verse fits it nicely.
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 10/30/2018 12:28:00 PM
Good thing is, they're really light! Thank you very much Chris - I wasn't sure how to categorise this one - I went for verse as it's not as free as free verse and not as rhymey as rhyme! What do you think? Nina