Valentine

"Valentine" Your face is always on my mind My feelings are getting too strong to hide The thought of your touch gives me chills in the spine I wonder if you'd care for this heart of mine? You walk pass and say hello every day I wish to say something to make you stay But my words just tend to disappear Time just stands still when you are near I love the scent of your cologne Your presence stays in the air long after you're gone Leading my heart and thoughts astray I swear I will tell you all this someday My dreams are always about you I think you would like them if you knew That's where my passion runs wild and free But you should know, you are there with me So now this question ponders on my mind Would you be my Valentine?

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MAHTAB BANGALEE

Date: 1/24/2023 2:22:00 AM

O O Valentine You are only mine; great to read the loving poem;

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/19/2023 5:40:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts of "valentine" through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Rosana Cardoso
Date: 1/21/2023 3:03:00 AM

Thank you for your comment and welcome. God bless you too.

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/18/2023 10:44:00 PM

Have you gotten a yes to your request? This poem oozes lust and desire. I hope that this feeling is reciprocated. Well written Asavvy1

Rosana Cardoso
Date: 1/19/2023 3:20:00 AM

It's about a crush. Thank you :-)

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/18/2023 9:23:00 AM

Those thoughts of unreturned love can drive you insane. If real, I hope all is well.

Rosana Cardoso
Date: 1/19/2023 3:21:00 AM

It's about a crush I had. Thank you for your comment :-)