The Bubble Kid

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The Bubble Kid


The little tike went into his mother's closet took her red dress 
and made himself a magic cape of linz chiffon. He then shackled
the beach with his restless feet stirring the waters of Cozumel
with his fast runs and whooping laughter.  A little muchacho watched
behind the scene as the bubbles filled space and ransacked poverty at 
a glance.  Eyes big as saucers took in the galoric bubbles in dazzled urgency. "Como por encanto" (as if by magic) he uttered.
Voluptuos bubbles burst forth then vanished into thin air.  Elongated
air balls, he thought as he sauntered close to watch. "El cuadoro magico"  he exclaimed. Primal instincts for beauty and hope gathered in the dawn.  "Velado" (veil) he uttered as he pressed his lips to the fabric  and inhaled the lingering scent of last night's perfume. Tanned hands became runes of valor that day on the Mexican shore. Together they made magic bubbles and spread them all along the side of beach, while the Canadian's  slept.  

The End....

Recipe for making bubbles  
	6 cups water (distilled is best but tap water is fine) 
	1/2 cup blue Dawn dish detergent(ultra concentrated)  
	1/2 cup corn starch  
	1 tbsp baking poweder(not baking soda) 
	1 tbsp  Glycerine
Bubbles make your morning brighter , happier, and snappier 
Take them to the beach,  watch them come alive unplanned 
Masyh multicolourous shades rising, diving in the sand !
                                                *************
March 10, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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  1. Date: 3/18/2017 7:45:00 AM
    Really cool Rose, brought me back to the fun of being a kid.

  1. Date: 3/12/2017 5:16:00 AM
    Excellent imaginative write. Well creatively penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

  1. Date: 3/11/2017 8:07:00 PM
    Pleasure bubbles for us all. : ) Thanks, Vienna.

  1. Date: 3/10/2017 5:19:00 PM
    A delightful piece on a most underused topic...bubbles! Very creatively penned, so joyful and captivating. Reminds me when I gave bubbles to refugee children and their look of sheer wonder at the mass of floating spheres.:-) Exceptional writing, a pleasure to read.:-) thank you for the recipe too. many blessings to you :-) lynn

  1. Date: 3/10/2017 2:10:00 PM
    You are wonderfully imaginative with your poetry, Vienna. Always a joy to read your fabulous narratives. Hugs. T.J

  1. Date: 3/10/2017 11:47:00 AM
    ohh, i get two treats here, vie.. a superb read and the bubbles recipe... very imaginative; love your spirit!.. huggs

  1. Date: 3/10/2017 6:58:00 AM
    Vie you're an adventurous lady. Wish I could see you scattering bubbles on the sand. Lovely write.