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Beyond the horizon, clouds of dust and gas formed, creating a burning love. Her body began to expose a blue glow, releasing energy, with passion, and swells. For many years, we were locked in an orbital embrace, until, the core changed its appearance. I migrated away from the gravitational impact of her overgrown, shapeless matter. Without support, her body became a red glow, collapsed, then died.

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Date: 1/18/2012 12:09:00 PM
William..... Congratulation to you on your win.
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:51:00 AM
Congrats on the win, the death of a star!!! NICE!
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Date: 1/18/2012 3:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/17/2012 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week William. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:49:00 AM
William CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner!! oxox love Anne-Lise
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