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Parallel Universes

Here I don't exist I am absent from my life I haunt this hotel Walls crooked, twisted Like an old man's spine Decades off-kilter The rust and Sharp smells Entombed in London's bowels Fill me with horror Moments stick together like gIue In an endless déjà vu In this twilight zone

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Date: 9/27/2018 1:05:00 PM
This is a really nice and interesting write, the concept of parallel universe is something which amazes me the most, imagine that there is a better version of you, a different one and there are infinite number of possibilities, schenarios for every decision you take, still it is only a theory, but I would like to meet another me someday, lol, I have heard many incidents of deja vu but unfortunately hasn't experience one personally, but this sure seems like a really interesting thing,
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Date: 9/25/2018 8:15:00 AM
Interesting write Zara. This may sound strange but as I read your poem the image of an actress trying to make it in London theatre and feeling lonely and out of place came to mind. So many interpretations in poetry.
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Zara Bosman
Date: 9/25/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks! I love that idea.
Date: 12/26/2017 5:33:00 AM
Very deep haiku Zara.. However haiku are about nature, you could call these senryu instead..
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Zara Bosman
Date: 12/26/2017 6:21:00 AM
Thanks for the tip!