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Below is the poem entitled OH MOON which was written by poet Judy Emery. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The poem is below.



Oh, moon what have you done 
Look at me, my poor heart is on the run
Where love could never find me,
What have I ever done
To make someone hurt me like this?
 my soul is starting to grow cold
I was left all alone in the snow,
I feel lost and confused
Not knowing what to do
Oh, moon you look gloom 
The same as I do,
I feel so divided in this world
my heart feels so empty
where darkness is starting to make a home,
old moon, things are starting to get out of control
I know you seen the show
Of what happen long ago,
The traps that were sit out for me to fall in,
Traps of lies that holds in his yes
Words of love that wasn’t true,
All he wanted was to break me down 
And keep me lost in the dark
Broken and weak 
to pick up the pieces of me,
in my eyes, I get visions of ancient time
but never for me to see what is going
to happen to me, 
I will always be on the run
I will always keep love from me
I will always cry to the old sea and the moon
that was always good to me.

Poetic Judy Emery © 2017
The Queen Of Darken Dreams Poetic Lilly Emery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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