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Leaves falling from trees, Thoughts are always like these, Taken by the wind.

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Date: 9/1/2020 1:34:00 PM
Beautiful, Lillian!!
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 9/3/2020 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Bobby! ~Lili
Date: 8/10/2020 12:58:00 PM
So true and beautiful :)
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 8/12/2020 6:57:00 PM
Thank you P.M.! :) ~Lili
Date: 6/9/2020 1:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely haiku, Lili! I hope you keep entering contests - they are a great way to learn new styles and get practice at the styles we already know. ~ John
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 6/9/2020 12:36:00 PM
I'm entered in every contest I can. I can't read notes so I can't enter the musical ones that have specific beats but, other than that I've entered every single one. I love trying out new styles but I think I fell in love with rhyme and haikus. I've won a few contests and am entering wether I win or not!
Date: 6/4/2020 4:47:00 PM
Yes! Now that's what I call writing
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 6/6/2020 12:40:00 PM
Aww! Thanks Anthony! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 5/26/2020 11:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/27/2020 12:04:00 AM
Thanks Amelia!
Date: 5/25/2020 1:02:00 PM
Wonderful. I love how it has emotion to it. Congrats on your win.
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/25/2020 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 5/23/2020 9:08:00 PM
Wonderful poem Lillian! Congratulations on your trophy win! This one's a fave for me :) xomo
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/23/2020 11:28:00 PM
Aww thanks!
Date: 5/23/2020 6:08:00 PM
What a beautiful portrayal of thoughts Lililan! Congratulations on your win :)
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/23/2020 7:23:00 PM
Thank you! Aditi!
Date: 5/23/2020 5:47:00 PM
what a pretty piece, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/23/2020 7:22:00 PM
Thanks Jan! (:
Date: 5/23/2020 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win Lillian! This haiku is lovely! Blessings xxoo
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/23/2020 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Connie! I wrote it after learning about it in my history! It was fun to write, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 5/23/2020 9:54:00 AM
don't know haiku from senryu but this is good regardless. Labels aren't what counts, it's the message and I get yours clearly. Very good. Congratulations and welcome to PS.
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/23/2020 12:12:00 PM
Thanks! A haiku is a poem whose lines have to have 5-7-5 syllable count.
Date: 5/23/2020 7:39:00 AM
Lillian a marvellous haiku. Congrats. Mohan
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/23/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thanks Mohan!
Date: 5/22/2020 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lilian. Eve
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/23/2020 2:38:00 AM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 5/22/2020 7:30:00 PM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on your top placement. All my best and thanks for entering, Bless you with love, Gina
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Lillian Twolsky
Date: 5/22/2020 7:33:00 PM
Wow! I didn't even know I won! Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!