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I kneel 'neath the moon, soft-suffused in its beams, My toes dig through sand, wet and cold as the tide, Nigh midnite's raw wound I beseech to dark dreams, Why heaven's heart, sweet, won't move deep inside? No more do those charms of my faith light my soul, Though here by the shore I can taste Zion's breath, So where has the joy gone that once left me whole? O Calypso come christen your bloom with my death. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Writing Prompt - Let's Write A Lento" Poetry Contest, Dear Heart, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/10/2020 1:42:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win in my lento writing prompt challenge with the wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/8/2020 5:47:00 PM
Awesome. Buddy. And well deserved as always
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Date: 2/6/2020 5:26:00 PM
Another super poem Greg, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/31/2020 8:08:00 PM
Gregory, I know many who would love to know the answer to your elegantly stated questions. My heart cries for one in particular. Once again your golden pen yields a deep and thoughtful message. Blessings my friend ~ John
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Date: 1/30/2020 11:29:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Gregory. Stay near to the shore and breathe. Breathe 'til those lungs fill with enough air to carry you through to the next moment. Stay, for even a glimpse of joy can rekindle what seems a quenched flame. Hold on, my friend... <3
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