Jimerick - Lost In The Desert

In the desert, Jim strayed out of reach "How far is the sea"? He'd beseech Arabs laughed and gave smiles, Said "It's two thousand miles" Jim said "I'll just stay on the beach".

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Roy Pett

Date: 6/18/2017 10:19:00 AM

Hi Ray, I've been reading your limericks which are all brilliant and this one is a cracker, keep um coming, :))

Ray Gridley
Date: 7/8/2017 4:38:00 PM

Cheers Roy!

cheryl hoffman

Date: 6/14/2017 7:38:00 PM

Love your jimericks and gladysricks Ray; they make me smile!~Che :) PS hope Jim at least runs into a lemonade stand!;)

Ray Gridley
Date: 7/7/2017 6:07:00 AM

Haha, Che, yes he will get thirsty soon.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/14/2017 3:01:00 PM

Like this one! Excellent, Ray!

Ray Gridley
Date: 7/7/2017 6:06:00 AM

Thank you Kim!

Dean Wood

Date: 6/14/2017 2:31:00 PM

hehe Another good one Ray! - Dean

Ray Gridley
Date: 6/19/2017 3:29:00 PM

Thanks Dean!

JAN ALLISON

Date: 6/14/2017 12:41:00 PM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Ray Gridley
Date: 6/19/2017 3:28:00 PM

Cheers Jan!