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Monstrous terror looms Man and horse sweat fear's horror All run to meet death. Contest - Instant Telegram / Sponsor - Nathan D. February 20, 2016

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Date: 2/25/2016 8:33:00 PM
ooh, great imagery, to sweat fear's horror!!! Hi, my friend Caycay. I'm way behind at comments and don't know if I even have time for Hotmail. Anyway, I hope I did not owe you any mail, but now that I think of it, there may have been a soupmail I did not answer. Let me go see!!!
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Date: 2/24/2016 1:41:00 PM
This is very deep, so much said in such few words CayCay, gl in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 2/22/2016 4:33:00 PM
This is gripping CayCay...and magnificent! #7
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:33:00 AM
Sadly this haiku is historically truer than many think. Success in the contest. And thank you for reading my poem on the dog and the shrink. Glad you enjoyed it. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:47:00 AM
Very imaginative use of words and skillfully constructed. Emile.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:32:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Death seems to be reaching out for them..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:17:00 AM
I picture it!!! Wonderful Haiku
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:07:00 AM
ohh my, this is really gripping,cay!... lovely, powerful 'ku.. huggs and miss ya!
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:00:00 AM
Oooh this packs a wallop!
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:07:00 AM
Haiku at its best dear, CayCay! Good luck!
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Date: 2/20/2016 6:26:00 PM
I see I have some competition for dark writes after all! :) Loved this!
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