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A HARD SUBJECT TO CONSIDER WRITING ABOUT...suicide...BUT AWARENESS SAVES LIVES.

he stepped inside, his heavy life, had weighed him down, she cried, all the while, his finger, banned in gold, a shine he leaves behind, he takes his memories, to the other side, her diamond lights, a dark, dark sky, It's to remind, she'll be waiting, until, her angel wings arrive.

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Date: 2/22/2020 9:42:00 PM
Awww, bless . . .
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Date: 3/20/2019 3:09:00 PM
Very sweet, Vickie.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 3/22/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Line...Love Lives On.