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Frozen Wings

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Frozen Wings

This world is cold,
More than any other.
It freezes the wings of  angels,
Damns them to their hell.
Only burning in love
Makes it feel sweet.

Wallow in the sweet
Warm care and bitter cold.
Harmony in life and love,
Balance each other,
Like the pits of hell
That beg for an angel.

Bless this angel
Pure and sweet.
The heat of hell
Thaws the wings frozen in the cold.
What is one, without the other?
How can one endure life, without love?

Powerful is love.
An angel fallen
Calling for other
sounds so sweet,
Relief from the cold.
Our world longing for hell.

True hell
Compliments love.
Shelter from the cold,
Spares the angel
Makes life feel sweet.
A feeling unlike any other.

The other
Feeling, screaming hell
Overbearing sweet
Longing love
Of an angel
Who has tasted cold

There is not one without the other, life and love.
Endure hell to have an angel,
To make sweet the cold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 1/5/2017 6:16:00 PM
Very nicely done:) I loved reading this poem:) very beautifully penned indeed:)
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Alessia Jay
Date: 1/5/2017 6:48:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 1/5/2017 5:23:00 PM
I loved this poem Alessia, I am not familiar with the form but as far as I am concerned, you did a beautiful job with it. Nicely expressed.
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Date: 1/5/2017 6:49:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!