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the orchestral trees
echo sounds of the woodwinds...
fell buzz of chainsaws

          


        June 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/13/2016 7:25:00 PM
Lovely haiku!
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Date: 7/1/2015 9:01:00 PM
very nice cut & sensory imagery! Light & love
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/4/2015 4:02:00 AM
Thanks Deb. Light and love to you too!
Date: 7/1/2015 4:30:00 AM
Wonderful haiku Keith n so is ur win! Big congrats!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:58:00 AM
Glad you read and enjoyed it Doc. Take care.
Date: 7/1/2015 12:54:00 AM
Keith, congratulations on your Traditional Haiku win. Love LINDA
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Linda.
Date: 7/1/2015 12:38:00 AM
Bittersweet Haiku, Keith. Well done and congrats. Regards, Viv
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:56:00 AM
Thanks Viv. Like the hat!
Date: 7/1/2015 12:11:00 AM
Lovely win... SK
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:55:00 AM
Cheers Skat.
Date: 6/30/2015 8:10:00 PM
Great twist at the end, Keith! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:54:00 AM
Thanks again Kim. Glad you liked it.
Date: 6/30/2015 7:07:00 PM
Well done, pointed, Haiku. Congrats on the placement.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:53:00 AM
Cheers John. Sometimes we can't see the wood for the trees!
Date: 6/30/2015 4:57:00 PM
Keith, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:52:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 6/30/2015 4:36:00 PM
Beautiful...and sad haiku, Keath! Very creative. Congratulations on a most worthy win. // paul
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:51:00 AM
Thanks Paul. Likewise.
Date: 6/30/2015 1:43:00 PM
wow, this one has the most impact of the ones I am seeing today. BIG congrats, Kieth.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:50:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. It's sad but true!
Date: 6/30/2015 1:18:00 PM
super haiku Keith congrats on 9th place hugs
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/1/2015 4:47:00 AM
Thank you for that Shadow. I'm still trying to get my head around these haikus!