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he has a dark side
this lunartic on moonshine -
but it's just a phase

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By Keith Trestrail
For the Drunken Moon contest.


       July 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/17/2015 7:47:00 PM
Hi Keith, I love your Drunken Moon.. Congrats on your win in this clever contest!
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Date: 7/11/2015 1:03:00 AM
Keith Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/9/2015 12:38:00 AM
Awesome win Keith! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:31:00 PM
Haha that is awesome, what a creative take on the prompt!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Cas. Lovely to hear from you.
Date: 7/8/2015 10:46:00 AM
Hi Keith! This is an excellent haiku, in which each line deserves high praise. Yours is a very unique take on this theme. #7 Congratulations on your much deserved win. // paul
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 6:36:00 PM
You too Paul. Thanks for the comment.
Date: 7/8/2015 9:12:00 AM
Love that second line...congratulations
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 6:39:00 PM
Cheers Tim. All a bit of fun!
Date: 7/8/2015 8:17:00 AM
Favorites so far, congrats.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 6:40:00 PM
Appreciate it Richard. You too.
Date: 7/8/2015 6:59:00 AM
White lightning and a waning moon....Great take on the theme Keith
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 8:13:00 AM
Thanks John. Congrats to you too. Some contests are a lot more fun than others - this one eclipsed all the others. Oh boy, there I go again! Cheers!
Date: 7/8/2015 2:28:00 AM
very clever Keith - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/8/2015 9:08:00 AM
I've have personal issues which stopped me from even coming on the site let alone writing - muse is back now:-) hugs Jan xx
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Jan. Unusual not to see your name on the winners list.
Date: 7/7/2015 11:38:00 PM
GREAT to see this so high on the chart!! Congrats
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 12:04:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. I didn't realise I was so much like the moon!
Date: 7/7/2015 11:31:00 PM
Congrats, Keith on a clever entry. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 12:07:00 AM
Cheers Viv. A personification - well, the wife says I'm not of this world!
Date: 7/7/2015 11:09:00 PM
Awesome drunken moon! Congrats
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 12:08:00 AM
Yep, the moon is high tonight! Cheers!
Date: 7/7/2015 10:42:00 PM
Like Suz, on the bottom, I enjoyed the word play. Mighty clever. Keith, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/8/2015 12:10:00 AM
No, thank you Skat. I wasn't sure what you were looking for but I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 7/6/2015 1:44:00 AM
Love the word play here. Been a while since I wrote a Haiku. Must give it some thought. lol SuZ
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/6/2015 2:13:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Suz. Haikus aren't easy but they are fun!
Date: 7/4/2015 9:51:00 AM
hahaha. Finally I see someone did it. you used Moonshine. You should go to Richard Lamaroux's poem and see what I wrote there about using moonshine. Great minds....
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Date: 7/3/2015 5:58:00 PM
Clever work, Keith!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/4/2015 3:49:00 AM
Clever comment LM. Thanks for your encouragement.
Date: 7/3/2015 3:33:00 PM
Brilliant, clever haiku! Looks like a winner to me! Good luck in the contest, Keith! Pandita
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/4/2015 3:48:00 AM
Thank you Pandita. Thought I'd have a bit of fun with it.
Date: 7/3/2015 8:14:00 AM
the looney age is here! Three puns in a row. Thank-you for today's smile.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/4/2015 3:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Duke for visiting my home page. Anytime I can put a smile on someone's face is a good day!
Date: 7/3/2015 3:04:00 AM
Keith, LOL, I think this is clever, using phase to end it all. Good luck in the contest ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/3/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Linda. God bless!
Date: 7/2/2015 9:58:00 PM
cute haiku
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 7/3/2015 6:36:00 AM
Thanks Josefina.