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Decisions Always before Actions

Mistake can’t cause a fetch of honey from a busy bee hive ridiculous is an instant transit from sleep to a sea-dive a decision lands one in distant Germany or a palace of whores despite how many don’t blame the devil after having the satisfaction live.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/14/2016 8:26:00 PM
Very insightful! Happy Valentine's Day! Your friend Chantelle :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/16/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Chantelle. Happy valentine to you too.
Date: 2/13/2016 7:47:00 PM
happy Valentines, Funom... LINDA
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/16/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Lindy! Happy valentine to you too. How was the love season?
Date: 2/9/2016 4:56:00 PM
Very true! I love the the first line. I didnt know you were a published author until i read your bio. Really cool!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you very much njeri... Yes I am and I am hoping to publish more books, Especially a poetry collection!
Date: 2/8/2016 4:12:00 AM
A lot of interesting metaphors here. Self-control is a life-long issue for many of us. Funny you are. I like the moral sense you have too.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke
Date: 2/6/2016 8:34:00 AM
Epic write friend. LINDA
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:41:00 AM
hugs, hugs and much hugs