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Dancing in the rain

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Dancing in the rain

Dancing in the rain
washing away the pain, 
darkness, is a place of true madness; 
a place the sun never truly shines
sunset you will only crave to see, 
and it only give shattered dreams, 
I sit alone on those rainy night
crying my eyes out for true love
to open his ears to me; 
but only weaknesses come to me, 
I am no arthropod that web traps
because I am the one that has fallen in it, 
city of lies is always nearby; 
Dark Angels; eyes are always on me, 
like a wolf looking for food; 
He makes me feel so drowsy
when he kisses my lips
I began to float, 
like I was light as a feather floating in
the autumn breeze; 
with a sweet shyness about me
that takes over me, 
when he plays around with my hair 
It feels so nicely touched; 
I loved that so much, 
He would take me in his arms
and he would charm my heart, 
rarely he ever makes me feel this away
then he calls me beloved; 
this is where I know to wake up, 
he cast a spell on me.

Poetic Judy Emery © 2017
The Queen Of Darken Dreams Poetic Lilly Emery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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