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 My mother said something I couldn't ignore
 at the dinner table that shocked me to the core.
   Okay, but I think you'll find
     any more and I'll go blind...
"no silly, I said you need to masticate more!"


               February 2016


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Date: 9/14/2016 7:34:00 PM
Brilliant!!!
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:30:00 PM
Chuckle, chuckle my friend.Nicely done.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/22/2016 6:32:00 AM
Cheers Donald. BTW, she was right - I did need to masticate more!
Date: 2/18/2016 3:13:00 PM
you almost fooled me, keith!,,love the meaty punchline!..huggs
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:39:00 PM
haha, Good play on words, Keith. Kareoke on!!!
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Date: 2/16/2016 3:51:00 PM
This is excellent, Keith!! Thank you for the laugh:) An old wife's tale which maybe should have effected 'hearing' and not 'sight'! // paul
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/16/2016 4:40:00 PM
Cheers Paul. What you can't see in my avatar pic is the white cane!
Date: 2/15/2016 5:10:00 AM
the rhyming i enjoyed hahahah .. thanks for sharing - cheers
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 2/15/2016 5:54:00 AM
Thanks for that, Sarah. English is a funny language!