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In the dark I sit I don’t seem to exist. This world Is my coffin I’m buried alive, Forced to see The pain of mankind Everyday is more intense Than the last, It’s getting harder To breathe in the cask. Loosing strength Can’t go on Much longer As I lay here unconsciousness takes over. 02/17/08

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Date: 12/17/2012 2:56:00 PM
Well.. this is very deep, yes indeed the pain of mankind is all about us, but if we were to dwell on it, we are just adding our pain to it, as for the world beyond mankind that is far from a casket, it is a beautiful paradise which can soothe our pain, love Elizabeth
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